| Reviews for Cleft |
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   JuliaFC chapter 1 . 6/4 Sorry but how did Adrien split in half? O_o |
| Faye chapter 1 . 4/7 I like it but I wish it was longer and more descriptive. also a scene where They do it at the same time ;) |
| DarkBalance chapter 1 . 10/28/2019 If this was your first smut piece, you must have studied well, because it was extremely well-written! An additional piece about the aftermath, or even with a conclusion to whether Adrian and Chat stay separated forever or if Marinette ever find out they're the same person would have been really interesting, but I am also satisfied how you've left things. Thank you for being brave enough to share! |
| potterqueen86 chapter 1 . 1/31/2019 I love it!ยก!? |
| Constance Truggle chapter 1 . 1/16/2019 For your first exotic fic, this was very well done. You explained well about the split body feeling/thought sharing within the story, and the eroticism itself was beautifully portrayed. Also, it was hot. Thanks for sharing! CT. |
| LunareyGale chapter 1 . 1/14/2019 For your first erotic fanfic, this is pretty dang good. It's got me hot and bothered. Good job. |
| chicaguate2013 chapter 1 . 10/31/2018 I would have liked a description on when she had both of them in her at the same time. But overall, I enjoyed it. |
| Amy chapter 1 . 9/11/2018 I enjoyed once I understood how Adrien and Cat Noir were separate. Although not 100% clear if the boys sussed out she was Ladybug too |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2018 Marvelous friend |
| anon chapter 1 . 4/7/2018 i dare say that you could've taken their shared senses a little further by Chat making Mari give him a bj while Adrien is inside her. That way, the two guys' pleasure would increase and the experience will be more intense. |
| YaoiFanGirl2012 chapter 1 . 1/6/2018 I love this so much! |
| witchinmoonlight chapter 1 . 9/29/2017 Strange yet interesting! I like it! That is so hot... With the situation that Adrien/Cat Noir are the same but in two different bodies, I'm surprised you didn't do the same with Marinette/Ladybug. Or does Ladybug not exist in this story? Either way, love it! |
| Mikkab chapter 1 . 9/15/2017 I loved it it had alot of fantasy in it at some point I was turned on and I could visualize every character in action anx love it |
| Miranda ShadowBlade chapter 1 . 8/29/2017 what...the...heck DID I JUST READ! DEAR LORD! This is honestly one of the best Miraculous fanfics I've read and just can't get enough of it. It was...unique to say the least and VERY erotic. I want a second part to know what happens next, and honestly, I might have to re-read it because of how good the writing was. I'm not weird...you're weird! |
| Unfound name chapter 1 . 8/26/2017 What did I just read? I think whatever inoccence i had left is gone now, BYEEEEEE DIDNT STAY HERE AS LONG AS I THOUGHT U WOULD Yeh that was pretty kinky |
