I like it!

Hello, first of all, thank you for that wonderful RyoAli fic, we definitely need more of those. You are a wonderful author 3

I liked your lemon and you did great for the first time writing it and I can totally imagine Ryo being so gentle with Alice for her first time...

omg my heart

awww

I tho Kurokiba gonna go wild but.. still good.
keep writing

I like. :)

Loved it; from start to finish.

It was short but intense. my heart ached a bit for Ryo. Great work.

Hey! Ty for the lemon! It was super cute :)
There aren't too many people writing for Shokugeki no Soma, but this was def one of the best I've read.

You're forgetting something. Ryou doesn't are to be "gentle". If he wanted to do it, and she asked him, he wouldn't ask if she was sure. He wouldn't confess either, but its still okay. The sex was, simply put, lame. Better luck next time.

Liked it! I enjoyed that it was from Kurokiba's POV and I can get to read what he thinks (or at least this side of him). Overall nice job for your first lemon, hope you get to write more.

Great! Amazing! I absolutely loved it. I think it was on point and can safely say it's one of the best fanfics and lemons that I've read! (and that would be a lot of fanfics :D) Good luck with future projects!

I am pretty sure he would go psycho made during sex

It was that bad actually...Congrats on your first lemon!