nice use of vocabulary. you had clear cuts of who is talking and when the subject changed. you do have one minor mistake at the end however, "She also hopes Caroline never sees that actually enjoys baking" it should be "sees that she actually...". Other than that, lovely characterization, I can see the characters actually doing this. You paint quite a picture. Nice work. There's the potenial to add another chapter, but it's fine if you don't.

love it

Aaaaaawwwww this is the cutest thing ever!

Pretty awesome!

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