| Reviews for Ancestral Power: A Tale of a New Storm |
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Poharan chapter 9 . 4h Thanks for give us a traditional Naruto and not a OOC, the dork and stupid Naruto is what makes it so memorable. Dattebayo! |
Fanboy2000 chapter 9 . 8/3 Man I havent seen this story in so long. Nice to see that you are still active after two years, I had enjoyed this story decently just finished rereading it. I hope you will be able to deal with life but also that you will update again soon. Thanks for the chapter. |
mastermacer780 chapter 9 . 8/3 I absolutely loved this fanfic. Probably the best Fairy Tail and Naruto crossover on the website. It kept my attention the whole way through and I never got bored! I hope you keep on with this. |
Guest chapter 9 . 8/3 Tragic, but expected |
MysticFanfictions chapter 6 . 8/2 I loooved this chapter! It's great. The converstions between all the characters are just written wonderfully well, I particularly enjoyed reading the chat between Naruto and Kurama at the beginning. It was heartwarming and sweet and I loved it. It really shows the bond the two has. There's so much I'd like to comment on, but then I feel I would be here for God knows how long, so I'll try to keep it brief. Definitely one of the most exciting things to see happen was all of the S-Class mages forming a mini-S-Class exam, seeing Laxus' thoughts and opinions on Naruto were...intriguing. (Did I mention how I really like the way you write peoples inner monologues?) I'm looking forward to Laxus being taken down a peg, when Naruto proves not to treat him and everyone else like bugs (Although I am confident that Naruto will show up Laxus, I doubt he'll just suddenly change his whole world view on how everyone is just a insignificant bug compared to him). Anyway, I'm rambling. It was cool seeing Naruto and Natsu fight, I didn't really know how Naruto would go about doing it, (I thought he'd maybe just punch him in the head or smt), but I really should've expected that he'd use the chains to tie him up. Wondeful chapter. Thank you. |
MysticFanfictions chapter 5 . 8/2 I absolutely loved this chapter! And the chapters before that as well. The antics between Naruto and Kurama are an absolute joy to read and had me laughing more than once. I also didn't expect that chat between Mira and Kurama, but I was pleasantly suprised seeing the two talk, it was quite nice to see them get along, especually seeing Kurama act so panicked and proud about spouting how "okay" Mira was. That was, like, oh my god, I'm cracking up, like, that line "Old man Hagoromo would be proud". I'm just laughing and feeling weirdly proud of Kurama. Absolutely brilliant writing. It was fun reading this and the earlier chapters (one of my favourite moments would most definitely be when Naruto showed Mira his "listI like how you portray the emotions, relationships and development of the characters; it's reasonably thought out. It's great. |
Guest chapter 9 . 8/2 Naruto by the end of the ninja war can make the Rasengan without needing a Shadow clone like he did with Makarov. |
LazyRedHead chapter 9 . 8/1 With how it seems so far I can weirdly see Laxus , erza and Mira fighting over who gets to take naruto with them on a job. Probably gray and natsu fighting over it as well tbh |
DipstickMadden chapter 9 . 8/1 More please! Love it |
Reem519 chapter 9 . 8/1 Literally had me rolling with this sentence! "Who cares if I can't read? You don't need to read to be able to kick ass," Naruto pitifully argued. Natsu nodded his head with approval before being slapped upside the head by Gray. |
Royal Bioforge chapter 3 . 8/1 but you said naruto volunteered to do this |
Uzumaki spiral chapter 7 . 7/31 Greatly appreciated |
Uzumaki spiral chapter 6 . 7/30 Great chapter |
I-Nex-I chapter 9 . 7/30 Why did Naruto need a clone to make the rasengan? |
jprdec29 chapter 9 . 7/29 grateful to see you again amazing chapter hopefully we can see more of this story in the future and you can finish it |