Your story was great! I loved every moment of it! I found myself taking very deep breath has I was reading innot sure if it’s because I was holding my breath some times, because I was so sucked into it) Nicely writing and a fantastic ending. I kinda wish I would’ve seen that sort of thing in the show. Not exactly like that, but the Pines Twin going into each other’s mindscape and really talk out what happened between them. Great Job! Great story!

I just realized something, Stanley probably see’s himself as a kid when in his mindscape, as a reminder of happier times. His mindscape in general is sad that feeling is there, watching Dreamscapesers I felt sad I mean the episode itself was sad. I’m fairly certain that ones mindscape isn’t supposed to be monochrome, blurry, in shambles and a bloody labyrinth.

This story is fantastic, and hit a little bit to close to home with me, if I'm being honest. Read this whole monster in one sitting and had to pause during the last chapter to brawl my eyes out. Smashed right through the walls to my cold, emotional repressed heart. It's been a long time I cried like that.

Good job.

Just finished and I loved it. Both boys had issues and neither was compleatly right or wrong, and that was shown clearly. nicely done.

Phew; I worried for a moment that you would trip us up at the finish line and actually kill off Stan. If you had, I would never have forgiven you. So I'm glad things ended well after all.
This was so intense; I loved it. Even though it was also really painful in some parts.
So good job.

Aw geez...
I'm not exactly crying, but I am actually tearing up a little bit.
Take that as a compliment; that almost never happens with fanfiction. Of course, I could just blame hormones or something, but I prefer to blame your spectacular writing skills.
Because it seems pretty genuine that Stan IS in that high an amount of pain, and while hearing Ford say sorry is probably just the beginning step to the healing process, at least it's enough for now, huh?
Beautiful work.

Holy Mother, this chapter was great. In a really heartbreaking kind of way.
My favorite part is where Ford finally yells that he wants his brother back; it felt for one small moment like he might have made some progress.
I really, really hope this can end well, otherwise I'm going to be very depressed.

This is intense; I can't breathe.

Do we really have to spell it out for you, Ford?
If self-esteem were water, Stan wouldn't have enough of it to reach his ankles, thanks to years of basically viewing himself as a worthless clown who ruined everything for you. He's spent a long time without any kind of real love or emotional support, and it appears to have done very terrible things to his psyche.
He needs help, man!

This story is completely perfect! It was amazing how the raw emotions of both of the twins were captured so beautifully, and it was definitely worth the read. By far the best fanfic I've read so far.

I can't help it. I laughed-actually laughed-at this line: "As satisfying as it would probably be, we're not going to win this battle with a left hook." You absolutely have to appreciate the irony there.

Here goes a second run-through. Why not? I loved the story the first time. It's one of the few fanfictions I find myself getting excited to re-read.

Amazing

This story was amazing! I’m suprised it hasn’t gotten more reviews. You should post on Ao3, I think it might get more reception there

The scary one is clearly a manifestation of not only hatred and anger, but also Incredible amounts of self loathing. It’s accumliated over the years, and held back from the tipping point only by the drive to save his brother. But now it’s all just come to a head. Ford needs to stop thinking of this situation as a physical battle, and look at this more from a psychological view.

This was absolutley fantastic!