Can't wait for more!

like it!
can't wait to read more!

Love it!

dont worry you dont have to update every week or every month as long as you dont abandon this story im good

Aww, I'm so sorry to hear that, sweetie. I'll keep you and your family in my thoughts. But regardless, I still loved the chapter! I love the friendly interaction between Ben and Malina and I think that you've fitted her into the story really well. Keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Don't worry about the chapter being a little bit late. I still loved it nonetheless! And I hope that your Christmas concert went well, I had a similar sort of thing with my school on Wednesday. I think this story's turning out to be really, really good. The concept's so unique and you're executing it extremely well! I can't wait to see what you do with it next! Maybe Malina could go to Mal asking for help with her new magic but then Mal would just brush her off or not know how to help her, which would lead to Malina losing her temper or snapping at her. Then you could maybe include something about how Malina's never lost her temper before, which just makes her panic more about these new changes. Don't feel like you have to use that, I'm just trying to help you generate new ideas. I know that whatever you decide to do with this story next it will be great, I have total faith in you! P.S. Sorry for the super long review! XD

Yet another awesome chapter! I can't wait to see where you take it from here! Maybe Malina could try to tell herself that her hair just turned green because green is a colour that is often linked to nature. But eventually she's going to have to face up to the truth, isn't she? XD I love this story though and I'm already excited for the next chapter!

I love the plot twist. I'm really curious now how she finds out she and Mal are twins. it's going to be interesting for sure.

This chapter was equally amazing as the first, if not better! I love the whole idea for the story and I think that you've fitted Malina in very well. I think that you could have some interesting plot lines to do with her if you're looking for any inspiration. Plus i love how you've made Malina close friends with Ben, I think that you could really utilise that if you wanted to do a chapter later on about him confessing his feelings for Mal to her. Anyway, enough of my rambling. That was an awesome chapter and I can't wait to read the next one! Keep up the incredible work!

I've been seeing the sets for this story on your Polyvore and I've been waiting to read it. Now that I've finally got time I think that it's great! This has such an interesting concept (like all of your stories do) and I can't wait to read more! I love Descendants and absolutely love your writing style, so I'm really pleased that I can read more of your work! Keep it up!

I like the intrigue and ominous of this story. It could go many ways. I am interested in reading more of the story.