| Reviews for Damaged |
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  Guest chapter 34 . 5/24 Please keep going! I am desperate to know how this story ends and have been waiting for so long. I love your plots and ideas and would just love to see it continue. |
| Guest chapter 33 . 5/23 Complimenti, spero riprenderai la seconda parte, spero che Severus possa rivelare la verità a Mara. |
 GryffindorGirl10 chapter 33 . 9/5/2019 Wonderful story. I can’t wait for the sequel! ️ |
| ParadigmShift81 chapter 29 . 12/17/2018 Oh damn. Of course magic diary. |
| ParadigmShift81 chapter 27 . 12/17/2018 Oh boy. Papa Morris is about to find out what happened. Fuck. |
| ParadigmShift81 chapter 12 . 12/17/2018 Oh snap. Didn’t see that coming. Nice plot twist. Well played. Well played. |
| ParadigmShift81 chapter 8 . 12/17/2018 Damn it Daniel. |
| Cheez Cheez chapter 1 . 11/18/2018 I was hooked after the first chapter and just finished the story in 2 days. It was so freaking awesome.. I think I've never read such a well writen fic before. My inner fangirl just exploded. Man, I can't even say much more xD sorry looking forward to the sequel *squeals* |
| pointy-ears98 chapter 3 . 7/26/2018 I think your story is really great but I didn't really understand why was the CPR sexualized and some part lacked in clarity (the lake scene at the beginning). It is really long so it would be hard to edit it entirely but it woud be worth it cause the plot is soooo interesting, if you need a hand I could helpThe amount of work you did is amazing. |
| pointy-ears98 chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 This first chapter really is promising. The storyline is very intriguing. Yes, there a few repetitions of words/mistakes, but you can only get better by writing more and you can alAys edit things. Plus this fanfiction has so many chapters, it's impressive ! |
| AlwaysASlytherin chapter 33 . 1/4/2018 Loved the story and hope you post a sequel soon. As always, thank you for sharing ️️ |
| E chapter 13 . 1/8/2017 I'm enjoying this, I really hope there is more to come! |
| Fire and Starlight chapter 11 . 12/27/2016 Please continue on this site. Its a good story |
| fowlgirl19 chapter 2 . 8/23/2016 also I would like to add that it's okay to unbutton a female'a shirt when giving chest compressions during CPR. it's the only way to get proper landmarks. I'm not sure if one would give CPR in a drowning situation, but water has to be pushed out somehow, right? ~FG19 |
| fowlgirl19 chapter 6 . 8/23/2016 I think this chapter is misplaced. I don't remember a conversation with Snape about pretending. her aunt just died and I doubt she would be annoyed that she couldn't tame her hair the following morning lol |
