I love this. It's great.

this was a really nice story. thanks for writing it.

Garnet is being uncharacteristically mean. I hope I understand why in future chapters.

I'm only half done with this chapter atm. lol.

Good thinking, Peridot!

I am liking this.

This is good.

This is really cool. I like Peridot's dynamic with Greg.

"'Dad' is your designated title of authority, so I will call you that! That's how hierarchy works!"

That's one way for it to happen!

I am really looking forward to seeing how this one goes. :)

This is extremely well-written and I am enjoying it.

This continues to be very interesting.

The way you handled this scene was very well done. I like how you portrayed Peridot's perception of Ruby and Sapphire. The interactions here are golden.

I am really enjoying this story.

This is really good! I'm liking the dialogue- very realistic.

This is really good! I'm liking the dialogue- very realistic.

Oooh! This is starting to look dark. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

This is really cool!

This story is off to an interesting start. I look forward to seeing what happens next. :)

That Haddaway reference was not needed XD

For a while I had a strong headcanon that Peridot was scared that the Gems would like get rid of her once she outlived her usefulness. My headcanon also included Peridot being worried about how the Gems see her.