Great chapter! I'm so glad you are writing this story again! I wonder what in particular is bothering Mara...

Keep on writing! And stay awesome!

Love it

Yay. That's an update

Well you didn't miss a beat when you posted this chapter. I'm impressed with the gaps between each chapter in real time because not everyone can pull that off.

So good!

As far this is interesting but I have not got much to say beyond my review of its precieding fic

I am really enjoying this story and I hope you are able to update soon!

I am loving this story, the first one and this one! All of your stories are so very well written! These two stories have helped to keep me same whilst caring for my hubby this week who contracted the H1N1 flu virus. He's been really, really ill and we've had a couple visits to the emergency room already. While he's been resting, I've tried to sleep but it's only been at most 4 hours a night, and snippets of that actually. But it's my husband who is suffering and I HATE to see him suffering so much. He does remind me of Luke in every way, his gentleness and his strength and the great love and loyalty he has for our little family (myself and our kitty), and our small group of friends. He even has blue eyes like Luke. Anyway, enough about us! I do hope you'll continue with this story. Rest assured, I will be waiting patiently for another update whether it's tomorrow or two years from now. I understand that life throws hydrospanners in the works and things come up that need tending to, I completely understand. I myself stopped writing in 2010. I was battling with illnesses and anxiety, and now that my illnesses are under better control, I've had writer's block and it won't let up. I'll get a few lines written and then I just sit and stare at that cursor blinking on that blank page and nothing comes. It's very frustrating. Anyway, I hope you're doing well, and I look forward to reading your next chapters whenever you are up to updating.

Damn good chapter

Love it

I'm liking it

Fantastic, keep up the great work!

Ah so sweet!

Congratulations on your new baby! Glad to see you are working away on this story.

I love this. Such complex emotions and feelings on both sides.