I absolutely adore this! Great job!

Omg this is one of the best ones I've read, AND THERES ACTUAL KISSING

*presses cheeks with palms* aaaaaaaaah this is precious. This is really, really sweet. I love your characterization and the dialogue; this is a fic I won't forget for a while. Thank you.

Okay but literally so fucking perfect?
I actually drew a comic of this and wanted to know if it was okay to put it on tumblr?
BECAUSE I LOVE THIS?

Awe such a cute one-shot! It just gives you a warm feeling! XDDD

Excellent! You've captured their personalities to a tee, and the pace and atmosphere set by the wording are in vivid harmonization. When I finished reading this story, I had to take a moment to fully realize that it was done, and I was so to speak, "back in the real world"; a hallmark of a well-composed emotion-based storyline. Great work!