This ist a Rly cool Story and i Like at :3

what witch craft if this there is no such thing as a male in neptunia this is heretics you all are heretics!

Yo creo que deberías completar la historia y luego si quieres puedes hacer la versión reescrita pero al final solo es tu decisión tu escribe solo para ti si te gusta esta sino te gusta como queda la historia eres libre de cambiarla si quieres es tú decisión suerte

If you dont think this story is good and want to rewrite, that your choice as an author. And dont worry, many authors have this problem and collagues. I would say start from the ground ago and who know maybe your writing passion will return, what also help is find inspiration on the story.

Well it seems like the 15% of him crashing after 3 hours have arrived xD

No se ustedes pero me sentí un tanto estafado ...

No worries, patience is a virtue as they say. You update when you can, at least you keep folks aware instead of being silent about whatever is up.

no need to say sorry man, i can wait. You just focus on college man. BUT. You cant forget about us, alright?

cameron, you ok?

Is like every member of Cameron's harem gonna have an H-scene or two? Cause I know just about every reader want's that.

I get to be the first one?

MUWAHAHAHA!

Nice to see an update, the onii-chan bit was good. Lookin’ forward to the next chap.

good luck with finishing man, and take as long as you need.

You do you. Keep it up.

I would be lying if i said i didn't like small...

that moment when you remember that Lady white heart had twin little sisters...