HAHAHA. I swear if I died right now I'd be in heaven. hahahahah

You're books are going to kill me with laughter

Hmmm is that, a hint of the Pie Pair? ;)
Ah, i really don't like gingerbread, never did. Go Allen, defeat those nasty cookies, and Cross, im not sure i can look at you anymore, your 'manly' shriek killed me, i was practically cackling. Luckily i had tissues near me since they were streaming down my face (thank god for my Makkachin tissue holder/teddy).

Hahahaah...Good one ! Though I am also a little creep out...

Omg. This has made my day, I loved it!~

Love it. Definitely gonna share it with my sister

lol that was a funny one indeed :)

Love it!

That is hilarious, so the Gingerbread Man was an Akuma all along? Won't Allen be able to detect it when he was young and while still under Cross's wing? Anyway, it was great. I wonder if you do write any Halloween kind. It would be hilarious too from you no doubt. This fanfic got me thinking, what if the Earl or Road is feeling bolder and brought Akuma Gingerbread Men into the Black Order to stir up trouble only for the two to nearly destroy the whole Black Order and followed the Noah back to their Ark to destroy all the remaining gingerbread men? Just an idea, but I like to read how you are going to write another one next year. Hopefully the anime for that will be out by then.

this was absolutely amazing and hilarious! loved the ending!

This is totally hilarious hahaha

Omg I can't stop laughing
Thanks For sharing this awesome story

Pfft. *horrid laughter* bravo! Love the last art XD Now, I'm kind of getting scared of eating gingerbread men :P

I Can't BREATHE.

This...This. THIS. WAS. AWESOME!

I honestly thought Cross just played a nasty prank on Allen, I love how he picked up Allen before running and when the Gingerbread Man reappeared, he wanted to make sure Allen was alright before fleeing.

I love it when people describe Cross as caring, because no matter how much of a jerk he can be, he does love Allen as his own son, so good job keeping the characters in character. I even imagined Allen getting his revenge by eating the gingerbread man as he was laughing like a psycho XD

Thank you, this fic was cute AND funny, and it brightened up my day :)