I think you did a great job writing Emerald and Mercury. Also, I like how you wrote CFVY, especially Coco. All of them were completely in character.

Seems pretty logical to me as well, and I just love this story :) You have a quite interesting writing style, and the part with Emerald and Mercury was really awesome! It's really hard to find some almost natural part with them so great job :) :D please write more :D

This was damn good.

I love the way you write Team CFVY and Coco in particular; I'm pretty sure something as weird as what happened in that match isn't something she's going to let go of that easy, especially since CFVY seems to be a team that's pretty close.
Also love how you portray Mercury and Emerald - yes, there's camaraderie and a sense of almost-friendship there, but they are still ultimately very dangerous people.
I actually wouldn't mind a sequel to this; more well-written CFVY stories are kind of my thing :)

When i see a new fic from you I do a fistpump. Interesting to see what might have happened after the battle between CocoYatsu and EmMerc, it gives a nice little backstory of sorts. And I totally agree with you with the Neo thing, ITS DEF NEO WTF WHO ELSE CAN DO ILLUSIONS. I guess she can project her illusions, since she did the same thing when she escaped with Roman on that airship in Vol 2.

LOL I didn't realize they were memes until somebody said she resembled Nyan cat. I dunno whether to be amused or annoyed. My first thought was that they were finally gonna give us a gay/bi character. What do you think about the two walking memes tho?

AN AU? YAS! *prepares for angst*