| Reviews for Spirit of Winter's Chill |
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ngregory763 chapter 1 . 5/19 This is fascinating! Sam is trying so hard and now this guy?! Please update soon? |
JaniceC678 chapter 1 . 12/16/2018 Awww...what a wonderful Christmas fairy-tale hunt! Loved it! |
Salishaventura chapter 1 . 12/2/2017 What a heartwarming story! Beautiful, I loved it. Thanks so much! |
Iuvsbruce chapter 1 . 10/31/2017 This was really beautiful! Thank you! |
LittleLurker chapter 1 . 6/9/2017 A really good story and beautifully written as well! I've also felt a little sorry for Jack Frost, which is why I liked Sam's idea of why he must have found peace eventually. Oh, and I loved the ending with the Winter Lord touching up their room! I came here from K Hanna's favourite stories... actually, I've no idea why I didn't try this a lot (like YEARS) earlier... but well, better late than never. I've really enjoyed this one but what I liked even more is that I found another proficient writer and I will now be a frequent reader - until I've read all your SPN stories (at the very least). Thanks for sharing your work here! Cheers, D. |
Frosty Autumn chapter 1 . 6/1/2017 Wow, what a wonderful, enchanting idea you had here! I wouldn't have thought of adding Jack Frost to the Supernatural roster, but hey, look, here it is, and it fits better than I could have thought! I'm almost mad I didn't think of it first... I actually found this story from an another unrelated author's Favorites list, I wasn't even looking for Supernatural stuff tonight. What a lucky score for me. I was just so terribly intrigued when I read the description. At the immediate mention, I was like, "Jack Frost? Sold." Folkloric figures always draw me in, I love folklore. The beginning started off so strongly, and that was it, I was hooked. I want to sleep so bad, but I had to see this through to the end, all in one go. Very clever choice of conflict, it got me so good. Plus, good on you for the hitch in Sam's plan just before the end (where Jack discovers the journal while Sam is away). Things can never be TOO easy for them, afterall. I was actually HOPING that some sort of set-back would happen just before "the stroke of midnight", because until that point the slow thawing of Jack Frost's heart was coming about just a little too smoothly... One thing, I felt that maybe some parts felt like they were going too fast in the middle section. Not as in the transitions to the next day, I actually really liked those cuts (normally I don't, but I actually like the breezy, airy stride of this one, it fits wonderfully with the tone, I think) but I mean some parts like the filler in between dialogue, such as expansion on description or feelings. But that's okay, it's really not a big deal, it didn't dampen my enjoyment, the description was satisfactory still and I saw the story play out well in the end, and if you feel this was the correct way to present your idea, keep it just the way you have it. This is your vision and I'm just reading it, afterall xD Also, just one teeny tiny, itsy bitsy (miniscule really) thing that's just been nipping at my brain. This fic hasn't been ticked off as 'Complete', lol. I need the closure! I need the official stamp to harken this fic's well deserved end so that I may be truly satisfied! Anyway, yes, in conclusion, this one is a winner, I liked it quite a lot! :D The wintery picture just brought beautiful images in my head, and the brotherly bond coming through was the perfect heartwarmer to ward away the imagined chill I got from the plentiful descriptions of frost. It feels kind of off that I'm reading this story at the beginning of summer... |
Sealure chapter 1 . 9/20/2016 Ok, WOW. One of the best stories I have read in any fandom on this entire site. Well done! The plot was engaging and it flowed. There were no stilted parts where it didn't quite seem to connect. The boys were completely in character the whole time, and this is all around just a spectacular piece of literature. Keep it up! ~~Lityalle |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2016 This was like an adorable fairy tale :) |
Ne'ith5 chapter 1 . 3/1/2016 Ahhhhh..sweet! Loved it. And a very, very, very belated Merry Christmas to you! |
MusketeerAdventure chapter 1 . 1/13/2016 This was such a wonderful story; and I especially loved the way you told the story day by day, with Jack Frost's heart melting moment by moment. The ending was well done with lots of angst and brotherly love! I am so glad for the opportunity to read this - thank you! |
A fan of SPN chapter 1 . 1/6/2016 Wonderfully written & that's what the brothers are about ! Thanks so much for this story ... |
K Hanna Korossy chapter 1 . 12/27/2015 I love this story. I like the mirror to Sam-as-fae one, which I also enjoyed very much, but I like this one even more for how much Dean is fighting his feelings, and how Sam ends up getting to him. Absorbing and sweet and lovely. |
SandyDee84 chapter 1 . 12/21/2015 This was great and completely unexpected. In a show that's mainly been about fighting the worst of the worst, it's nice to see a foray back into the more lighthearted tales. Although, I had a hard time not imagining Dean in a male version of Elsa's ice queen dress :) |
criminally charmed chapter 1 . 12/18/2015 What a wonderful Christmas present! Thank you so much. |
Katy M VT chapter 1 . 12/11/2015 Loved it. I want my own Jack Frost to take me to play with the Polar Bears, thogh. |