Reviews for Finding Fire
a7152966 chapter 17 . 9/12/2018
excuse me as I scream in my corner because this is good, this is really really good. I dedicated all the spare time I had today into reading this. I really love the parts then she's taunting the marines; I very much enjoy her sense of humor. and now I'm dreading marineford but before that there's thriller bark and saobondy park, and that's a whole other shit show for her to go through.
I hope what ever reason for you to go on hiatus goes away soon. thank you for writing this.
Malavita chapter 17 . 4/15/2018
Omg you are not dead! Im so glad TwT
I cant wait to read more but first I wish the best of lucks for your game, I hope it comes along well.
See ya!
PuddyKatz chapter 17 . 4/15/2018
Yeah! Updates xD
I-Kan-Spel chapter 17 . 4/15/2018
Glad to have you back! I love the style c:
Sagicknight chapter 16 . 2/8/2018
good luck :)
Hublehuh chapter 14 . 1/3/2018
Wooooo! Thanks for updating! It's great to see the pit being protective of riyo even though she doesn't really need protection. It's so sweet that Nami looks out for riyo and grounding her with all the physical contact, especially putting in a hug to stop her rampage. I am really looking forward to when robin starts trusting the crew more. Thanks for the update again! Looking for the next chapter already!
PuddyKatz chapter 13 . 1/1/2018
I love usopp as a character in the anime and I love how you write him in your story. I look forward to seeing him and Sanji potentially becoming part of her pit. Your story is very well written and a joy to read. Enjoy the new year! :)
Guest chapter 13 . 12/29/2017
This is amazing, the concept seems so unique. I really like where this story is headed, please continue this.
OwlsofDarkness chapter 13 . 12/26/2017
I laughed so many times during this chapter
Hublehuh chapter 1 . 12/20/2017
Oh man I love love this story. It's just so original and unique. With a plot like this there is always a possibility of it becoming too unrealistic or loses its original charm but you managed to pull it off excellently. It's Super engaging and I really appreciate how the straw hats stay in character. I love love how riyo is so protective over nami and chopper and the rest of the pit. And the cuddles ohh the cuddles... I'm looking forward to see more. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Fahdza chapter 11 . 12/14/2017
Wow! I reached the last chapter rather quickly.
Lord of the 13 hells chapter 9 . 12/4/2017
OMG SO MANY UPDATES! I was worried for ages that this story had been abandoned and now every time I finish a chapter a new come out! The story is awesome definitely one of my fav one piece fics! and this updated version is even better than the old one! Keep up the awesome work!
Guest chapter 7 . 12/3/2017
Interesting
Guest chapter 18 . 11/30/2017
PLEASE FINISH THIS OML ITS SO GOOD
GoldeneRose chapter 18 . 10/8/2017
I love this, it's really something special for me when I find an OC that is as well written as Riyo is.

PS: I hope you update soon because Fall has arrived :3
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