This story is fucking AMAZING! It’s so well written. I just binge read it all in a couple hours. Couldn’t stop. You have a lot of potential! Keep on writing pal!

It's been a while since my last fanfiction read. And I wasn't finding a fic of Captain Swan good enough like they are... until this.
My life was interrupting your fic's reading. Bcause it was so damn good!

Congrats,

This is a good story, I enjoyed it. I was pleased with how well you worked the time travel aspect, that is so tricky and can sometimes not play out. In this story it was very well done and the moment Killian caught up with Storybrooke Emma I knew the loop of time had resolved. That was really nice. I thought Emma and Killian were very well written, past Hook was dark and unknown to Emma but we could see where he was intrigued by her and cared for her. I liked his crew, the fairies were interesting, I liked Tink, Bae was sweet and while I was sad he left the ship we knew he had to. There were several shocks and surprises that made this amazing. Rumple in Neverland was completely unexpected and he was just so evil. I loved the way you wrote Emma's magic and True Love. I could not believe how much he loved Emma, that he wouldn't take the potion to forget her and instead chose years of loneliness and loss trying to get back to her. Wow! That's True Love. Thanks for writing, I have to see what else you have written.

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! LOVE this! I'm torn between wanting more and being content with it ending here xD

Oh wow that all I can say wow. I rwally want you to write a Sequal. How will their trip to neverland be now that neal it with them. Now that hook and Emma are in love. This story is too amazing not to write a Sequal. Please do.

Oh wow. This story is amazing. It really really is. I haven't enjoyed a fanfic like this in a long time. I started this and read it all in one . I'm gonna be really tired tomorrow. Please write a Sequal. I want to see hooks reation when Emma almost drowns . Will it be David who save her or will it be hook . I also want to see if he will let her to to New York with Henry. And will the kiss work this time . So please do a sequel

Sorry to see that this is over, I've enjoyed it so much! But I think the ending is good and fitting. And with CS finally reuniting in the present and saying "I love you" I couldn't have asked for more.

Completely Outstanding! You have talent! Your writing is incredible and you have this way of just making us feel emotions! You're amazing! If someday you decide to continue it , I'll be there and I'll be glad!
Thanks for this amazing story!
:)

It was wonderful! Thank you for writing it!

Yaaay

i for one hope you continue this story one day

No. Id say this was a great way to end it. Then if you start writing out new chapters. Make a sequel. Only if you want to. I liked this story. Thanks for sharing.

Im really glad they at least worked it out, and I cant imagine how Killian felt here realizing Emma was alive and getting to make love again after centuries :c So sweet.

Though maybe you should have ended it even before Henry was taken, just let the reader assume it did or didn't happen and left us on a more positive note. Only complaint!

Him saving Emma from Tamara right there was a nice touch too. He DID get to save her. My heart.

This has been a wonderful fic, one of my favorites, and I thank you for writing it. It was super unique, I love time travel and neverland fics so much.

Oh no! I hope the muse returns some day, whether it's for the season 3 adventure, or some fun one-offs within this world. It was such a fantastic story, loved the time-travel and how it made this epic OTP even more so! Loved the time spent in Neverland, and all the lead-up back to the present with Hook's new perspective in cannon, just wish we could have had a bit more in present day. Keeping the fingers crossed for more down the road! Thank you again for such a beautiful story!

I loved this story so much! Of course I wanted it to continue for ever and ever, BUT I really appreciate how honest you're being about how able you'll be to finish it later on. In the meantime, no matter how long it takes you to update, I'll be waiting to read it. I love Emma and Killian's dynamic, and if you go on to write them back in Neverland that will be awesome to read! Especially because I would love to see what Peter's reaction is to seeing them again. Not to mention the freak out that will surely come when her parents find out just how involved she actually is with Killian. Again, I looooved it, and I'll probably reread it soon. Thank you so much for getting to this point, I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.