You got problems and need to get help

I know It's been a few years but I really hope you can find the time to update this story.

will you continue the fanfic? i am really liking it, even if it haven't been updated for like, one and a half year

Like it so far. Do continue with the story...

Like the story, hope you update soon :p

The rest of Gohans body was telling his ribs to get out of sight, but they just weren't listening, were they? They were DEFIANTLY showing, lol.

Anyway, small grammar mistake aside, interesting story here. Chi Chi is one bad mother, huh?

I really like this and hope you continue soon

updates more common? i don't mean to sound rude but...i doubt it.

The description alone offends me and at the same time makes me laugh and makes me a little angry. Like wow just add in raping her own son while you are at it - oh wait you did. I can not even begin to describe how inopropriate and imature that sounds plus it also makes it seem like you don't actually understand what half of the abuses listed in the description actually mean nor do you comprehend how insulting and ignorant you come across for writing that. It comes across as imature and also as if you haven't experienced life yet. How old are you to just list stuff like that out to make it more 'dramatic' or whatever? I enjoy whumpage and some dark stories and i have read stories with rape that is tastefully handled - which was clearly not done here.

I really think the story should be goku x Bulma. You said in the summary that they would act as parents...and I don't think that the boy as traumatized as Gohan would be OK with his mother figure hooking up with someone else...

Also, I SERIOUSLY hope that you're NOT the type of author who just deletes reviews that actually have criticism in them - like the one I just sent you - and only listens to people who just shower you with endless praise.

And just like that, you've completely and totally invalidated the question asked in the story info with one bad decision.

No, seriously, by announcing that you're not going to have Goku and Bulma get together in this story, the question "Could Goku and Bulma be the father and mother Gohan never had?" is now completely invalidated because no child in their right mind would EVER be okay with the "mother they never had" not being with their father, let alone be the man they consider an "uncle" to them. At best, all Bulma is ever truly going to be to Gohan now is the "AUNT he never had", especially if she's going to be hooking up with "UNCLE" Vegeta.

I'm really sorry, but unless you bring in one of the many girls that Goku met in the original "Dragon Ball" - like, for instance, Suno, the cute, red-haired, brown-eyed girl he during the "Red Ribbon Army Saga", or Tanmen, the cute, raven-haired, blue-eyed girl he met in "Dragon Ball" episode 82 "The Rampage of InoShikaCho" - and have HER become Goku's new wife and the "mother Gohan never had", I really see no reason to continue this story.

It really is a damn shame to see what, by all rights, had the makings to become a really good Goku x Bulma story be completely ruined all because of one stupid review from a dumb VegeBul fanboy who puts his own greedy VegeBul shipping fanboy needs above LOGIC, COMMON SENSE, and PLAIN OLD MORALITY.

And just so we're clear: no, this is NOT a flame nor is it meant to be taken as one; this is just me giving you a little bit of constructive criticism and some thoughts to ponder, that is all.

Take care.

This is very similar to a story called broken saiyan... Don't know if it's copied or just coincidence

Basically ther same thing only she got kick out of the court room because she kept screaming

I like it my mom abused me when I was younger but my dad saved me