Reviews for The First Five Days
willam and jack and jake chapter 5 . 12/14/2017
loved it very well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 12/14/2017
cool very well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 12/14/2017
well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 12/14/2017
very interesting
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 12/14/2017
cool
Guest chapter 5 . 7/31/2017
Can you a start story that follows this
jasongd chapter 5 . 12/10/2016
Very good story congratulation
loosecat56 chapter 5 . 12/19/2015
Lapis for the win!
Dalekz universe chapter 5 . 12/19/2015
Aw what nice ending :D
loosecat56 chapter 3 . 12/18/2015
Update please!
loosecat56 chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
The inside of the temple, or the burning room, seems to be the main place of healing. Though it does make sense that Lapis would be revived in the bathroom.

Huh, I wonder if they shoved Jasoer in there would she go through a change?
Gemini Artemis chapter 4 . 12/16/2015
Nice chapter! It was so cute when Peridot spoke up in Amethyst's defense! And I agree with the headcanon that she would hide behind Amethyst when scared or in trouble. She did that repeatedly with Steven in When It Rains, so she'd definitely do it with Amethyst, who's even stronger than Steven and would be able to give her a sense of security.

I really like how you wrote Lapis, too, and how she tried to intimidate both Peridot and Amethyst. I look forward to the next chapter.
Lazy Watermellon chapter 4 . 12/15/2015
Really like this story
It has a realistic feel to it and every character is very on point
Connie is a real champ, and love chill amethyst. Be hooked fore more! Can't wait for Steven to see Lapis (if she doesn't get cracked first)
Pirate Lapis chapter 4 . 12/15/2015
Please please please dont end this next chapter. It's too cool to be only five chapters
DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 4 . 12/15/2015
Aaaahh yes. Amedot is my life, so thanks for this little snippet. I'm really intrigued with where this is going — continue, please!
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