| Reviews for The First Five Days |
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willam and jack and jake chapter 5 . 12/14/2017 loved it very well done |
willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 12/14/2017 cool very well done |
willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 12/14/2017 well done |
willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 12/14/2017 very interesting |
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 12/14/2017 cool |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/31/2017 Can you a start story that follows this |
jasongd chapter 5 . 12/10/2016 Very good story congratulation |
loosecat56 chapter 5 . 12/19/2015 Lapis for the win! |
Dalekz universe chapter 5 . 12/19/2015 Aw what nice ending :D |
loosecat56 chapter 3 . 12/18/2015 Update please! |
loosecat56 chapter 1 . 12/18/2015 The inside of the temple, or the burning room, seems to be the main place of healing. Though it does make sense that Lapis would be revived in the bathroom. Huh, I wonder if they shoved Jasoer in there would she go through a change? |
Gemini Artemis chapter 4 . 12/16/2015 Nice chapter! It was so cute when Peridot spoke up in Amethyst's defense! And I agree with the headcanon that she would hide behind Amethyst when scared or in trouble. She did that repeatedly with Steven in When It Rains, so she'd definitely do it with Amethyst, who's even stronger than Steven and would be able to give her a sense of security. I really like how you wrote Lapis, too, and how she tried to intimidate both Peridot and Amethyst. I look forward to the next chapter. |
Lazy Watermellon chapter 4 . 12/15/2015 Really like this story It has a realistic feel to it and every character is very on point Connie is a real champ, and love chill amethyst. Be hooked fore more! Can't wait for Steven to see Lapis (if she doesn't get cracked first) |
Pirate Lapis chapter 4 . 12/15/2015 Please please please dont end this next chapter. It's too cool to be only five chapters |
DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 4 . 12/15/2015 Aaaahh yes. Amedot is my life, so thanks for this little snippet. I'm really intrigued with where this is going — continue, please! |