Ah, you write fight scenes very well. It's a very patient, thoughtful approach to fight scenes and considering the battle-experienced characters, it fits very well. Well done.

BOY I SURE DO LOVE MIRSAN SPARRING. I love how you explain Sango's motivation for why she might want to go through with teaching Miroku how to hold his own a little better. I also love how Miroku knows more than a thing or two about how Sango handles herself in a fights... Comes naturally after all that time spent side-by-side in battle! And of course, the close proximity, the adrenaline and thrill of the fight, the ragged breathing - all perfect ingredients to a reward session afterwards ;) This is one of my favorite MirSan headcanons, that they get so excited and into sparring that it turns into something else entirely. This is just so in character that it feels canon to me. Wonderful as always and thank you for writing this

I don't know how I can express into words how excited I was when I saw you had posTED SOMETHING NEW and then when I saw what it was about THIS IS EVERYTHING I NEEDED IN MY LIFE THAT I /KNEW/ THAT I NEEDED. Pterodactyl shrieking might cover it but it also might not convey the excitement.
Anyway, the anime/manga totally didn't explore her guilt over hurting Miroku enough because you just know she'd be beating herself up about it forever and a day even though...you know, it wasn't really her fault.
I'm so excited I can barely even type that was so incredible, you honestly write both Sango and Miroku so well when I read their dialogue I genuinely read it in their voices hahaha.
When he called her tajiya-sensei I actually, literally screeched I don't know why I thought that was so perfect but it was.
AND THE ENDING GOD I love everything about this I think I'm going to go read it four more times.

This was so damn good! Kudos!

Awesome! I really love it! Good training sessions! I let my imagination fly away with this idea! I really think that miroku would love to lose on purpose since he can get sango all over him with that victorious grin on her face! Or maybe...he would try harder to win to get sango under him asking for mercy? XD dont know but i love it anyway...keep on with your incredible work! Hope to read something more from your hand and oh...i hope it will be a mirsang cause i just love this couple!