| Reviews for Break In |
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Guest chapter 3 . 5/11 You HAVE TO update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2019 please update i love your work and am dieing to see what happens next |
Estelle chapter 3 . 11/23/2019 Hey author I know your life is super hectic but I want you to know that I love you and your writing. I cant wait for your next update :) |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/18/2019 oh could you maybe make it so the wizards of the black circle try to attack bloom but valtor comes and saves her and then they all go looking for roxy on earth like in the show, thats if your running out of ideas, thank you |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 please update |
SernaJ chapter 3 . 9/27/2019 AAAA THIS CAN'T END HERE AJSDKHFJK |
Lucyole chapter 3 . 8/1/2019 Great chapter Stella goes behind her back and invites Baltor somehow I knew it when you writing her so nervous and mumbling about someone being punktual that she waited for someone. Bloom is still angry at him but he wants to make amends and tell her the full story when she is ready to hear him out great is that he gave her something to stave of the darkness for some time at least love it. Please write and update again that would be amazing *cupcakes for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 2 . 8/1/2019 A great chapter I must admit I was a bit irritated about that flashback but I think you want to show us her slow decent to darkness and the first triggers were with Avalon then I think Tecna knew there was something odd about him but she couldn't pinpoint exactly what is wrong, her parent are in mourning I wonder how old Daphne was when she died but giving Bloom her room even temporarily is a bit cruel. Bloom didn't mourn so much because she never got to know her so what is there to mourn when you never got the chance to connect as sisters at all right? I enjoy your story so far thanks for writing an sequel *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 1 . 8/1/2019 A good 1 chapter, Stella surprised them with her knowing of Baltor never saying anything she too is a great friend, I think the most angry would be Layla he has after all ravaged her home, her adoptive mother is great too and thinks she pushes herself to much. Bloom really needs to relax more and stop repressing her emotion one of these days it will blow in her face in the Form of dark Bloom I'm sure of it, she at least regrets her words to Baltor now and wishes probably to talk to him in an more calmer manner about the whole thing. |
mimisvpor chapter 1 . 7/21/2019 OMG DON'T BE SO PRIDEFUL BLOOM! ANYWAYS TGIS IS BLOODY BRILLIANT GREAT BUT PLEASE UPDATE THIS BECAUSE I READ BROKEN PIECES IN TWO HOURS AND I NEED ANSWERS AND FLUFF AND HEA AND MY GIRL NEEDS IT HOW CAN I LIVE WITH AN EMPTY SPACE FOR THE ANSWER OF THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY |
mimisvpor chapter 2 . 7/21/2019 I KNEW Stella knew! |
mimisvpor chapter 3 . 7/21/2019 Dark Bloom seems to be getting nearer |
Winxer4EVER chapter 3 . 5/14/2019 OMGGGGGGGGG! Can you please update this story? It's been way too long since this story has been updated. l need to know what's going to happen in the next chapter. I'm a massive Sparkshipper4EVER xoxo |
Puck627 chapter 3 . 5/10/2019 I love Broken Pieces! It is the very best Bloom and Baltor love story in all of Fanfiction. So when you started Break In, I was beside my self with joy. I hope that Bloom and Baltor will get married and have kids a boy and a girl. I hope you will make more and more chapters for this story as soon as you can. PS can you put Baltor into future chapters helping Bloom and her friends as they go on adventures agents the wizards of the black circle, Tritannus, legendarium and saving the fairy animals? |
Zara Bella chapter 3 . 3/31/2019 I know its been nearly a year but I still have hope that you will update sometime soon. I read both fanfics in one week and I'm devastated that there is no chapter anymore. Please give us a sign that you're still alive and that you might continue the story Ly |