Hey, don't stress over stories, when you get back to it is when you can. It is a really interesting and (probably, since I haven't seen others like this) original idea. You're wrighting style is nice and you're doing a fantastic job. Keep up the good work!

Okay... I'm not... I'm not feeling sad and dejected at all... Nope... Sniffle...
*pulls a Komui-worthy-personality-change* Getting down to business, I really enjoy this story so far. You're writing style is interesting and refreshing, especially compared to several others I have encountered *shudders* and my old writing style *loses balance from the shuddering & falls over*, and the interactions are pretty in-character. Your idea is also an interesting (and quite amusing :D) one, and I can't wait to see where this goes! Especially... the other characters' changes and how they react to the B.T. and T.B.~ I look forward to your next update, whenever it may be!

Aw... That's too bad. But I'll be waiting until you are ready! _ Keep up your good work.

OMG. That's is gold. *rolls on the ground, laughing* The whole sucking the mirror scene is absolutely hilarious. I think you don't have to worry about the dialogue, its pretty good and not OOC at all. Maybe Yu is but maybe Alma is not dead? So who knows.

But a gentle and calm Yu is a terrifying Yu. Haha.

Oh, might be too late say this but a Beta is someone who reads your story and correct your mistakes before you publish it. But it's kind of hard to find the right Beta.

Ahaha! This' much more interesting than I had expected. Little red, kid!lavi, Kid!Kanda vs. Allen, Lavi & Kanda. I can almost imagine it! It's all so freaking adorable.

Lol, Komuii you adorable Sis Complex Superior! Its pretty humorous! I vote for the Gender Bender! I want Lavi to STRIKE! himself! And Kanda would probably be pissed off because it gives Lavi and Allen to tease him of his girly appearance. Hehe...

Woah...that is something.

I hope you're okay, though? Have you seen D. Gray Man Hallow? I haven't yet but hoping that it will be executed properly!

Keep Up The Good Work~!

good luck. I will be waiting.
I feel a bit sorry for the IPod
xD

I love this story so much!
I hope you get your IPod fixed soon
and I hope you keep on writing!
You're a great writer and I can't wait for more!

well now

Beta is someone who reads the chapter and points out grammar mistakes and things like that. They're pretty much an editor for your fanfiction. It's good to see you updated though. I really like the story so far.

A beta refers to a beta reader and what they are is essentially an editor for your writing/story.

I've been awaiting your arrival! I'm so happy you're back! :D

Wow I wish I had read this sooner. You have a really creative plotline going. I'm not sure what person I'm most curious to see out of the three. I'm really excited for this and I can't wait to see next chapter.

You need to update this!