| Reviews for It's a Long, Long Road |
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B.E.A.T.N chapter 21 . 3/15 4 years later, and I still hope that one day this amazing story will have a conclusion. Good luck to you. |
Jacob Douglas1 chapter 21 . 4/18/2018 i doubt your going to work on this but this Amazing |
Killer Queen Bites Za Dusto chapter 1 . 4/24/2017 I honestly love what you're doing with this story and I can't wait to read more! It's great that you're having like this whole huge character crossover and I love it! |
The StoryBook Tree chapter 20 . 7/16/2016 Oh, thank Atom that you got this out. I've been very, very busy so I cannot write, but we can talk about that later. I've been waiting on this. This is really good and the only thing I debate upon is the pain that phade feels. that kind of pain would make a super-mutant cry and beg for mercy but she took it like a champ. that makes her character cooler but did she lose nerves in a fight or something? And, I have some more information on Spirit/Marcus if you want to messag or email me. He's crushed unruly khans skulls before underheel. but little is personal to him at this point. I hope to see him on the next chapter and I hope you will message me. You're doing amazing work, Sayonara to subete no besuto(it's Japanese. |
Dragonsoul1 chapter 20 . 7/16/2016 Phade is pissed off. someone is going to die. possibly multiple people. all of them in very, VERY gory ways. |
HermitWitch chapter 19 . 6/15/2016 Great chapters(17-19)! Love that you mentioned how often those vertibirds crash, that drives me crazy. Those are some clever boys, and Matt might have some questions after what he saw. ha! |
LT Hawkin SpartanII 065 chapter 19 . 6/14/2016 Holy Sh**it I did not expect for you to use so many of my ideas. An amazing chapter can't wait for chapter 20. You did a great job at structure, plot and detail. Nothing felt out of place. Again can't wait for more. |
The StoryBook Tree chapter 19 . 6/13/2016 That was a good chapter. :). It was more of an idle chapter with some passive action but these are important because they build characters on who they are and meant to be. Bravo. I guess I did't play enough of New Vegas to know who showed up. At least, I assume they're from New Vegas. Doing Great, Jaeger. :) |
Guest chapter 18 . 6/9/2016 Update |
Guest chapter 16 . 5/31/2016 Upd8 m8 pls I'll r8 8/8 it's gr8 |
Guest chapter 18 . 5/16/2016 Update please update |
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 13 . 5/12/2016 I don't like BoS in general and their incarnation in FO4 in particular but... didn't you overdo it with Arthur? |
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 12 . 5/12/2016 That's... creepy. |
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 10 . 5/12/2016 East Coast badasses are frightfully similar-minded. West Coast ones use Rex instead. |
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 9 . 5/12/2016 With a winning smile and a blazing LAER rifle. |