Thank you for the longer story. I believe it was good to have the different time frame completed, especially the courtship ones. The epilogue 10 yr later is not an issue at all.

I've read this many times and I've loved it every time. Some authors write in such a sombre tone that even happy scenes feel like a downer. You're the opposite, every scene in this story makes me smile whether they're overtly humorous or not. It's been several years since your last P&P story but I hope you will one day give us another.

Awesome story!
I did really enjoy reading your thought process as well, that makes it all the more unique.
I think my favourite part is your solution for Charlotte.
I enjoy her being independent while still her sensible self.
Lots of Love

Thanks for sharing yOur stor6, i enjoyed it!

Nice story!

good story, originality with the fate of Wickham, I liked it

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Your character studies were the highlight for me. I felt you did a really good job of understanding and developing all the different characters. And I completely agree with your anger against Bingley; I can never accept that Jane took him back

Primeiramente me desculpe por comentar em português, porém só sou segura para ler na sua língua, ainda não tenho confiança suficiente para escrever.
Enfim, gostaria de parabenizar pela história, achei adorável em todos os aspectos, além de muito inteligente a forma como brincou com a sorte. Gosto de perspectivas assim. Hahaha
Eu também sou bem contrária à ideia de Fanny/Henry e não consigo entender como alguém pode conseguir ver futuro nessa relação, fica mais que claro durante o livro que ele só queria se divertir com ela e que só (aparentemente) se "apegou" quando de deparou com o obstáculo da conquista. Compreendo, no entanto, que isso pode estar relacionado com o fato de muitas mulheres preferirem personalidades cativantes, mesmo que superficiais, e com a persistência ideia de que libertinos regenerados podem abrir mão de tudo por um verdadeiro amor. Eu não acredito nisso (no começo tudo bem, mas o passado sempre volta... ninguém deve mudar por ninguém).
Porém eu também não curto muito a ideia de Fanny/Edmund, confesso que toda vez que leio (ou vejo as produções) shippo ela com o Tom, embora tenha consciência que ele seria venenoso (no sentido de diabolicamente esperto) para ela, o que provavelmente também não daria muito certo. Mas fazer o quê, pelo menos ficamos na esperança que a experiência de quase morte tenha servido para alguma coisa.
Obrigada por tudo e parabéns!

That was perhaps my favorite epilogue ever! I really loved the story told in it instead of cataloging every buddies future. I love where you sent off all your characters too. I really love seeing Wickham and rather Think he deserves that fate. I really enjoyed your whole story. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Sorry I haven’t been reviewing, I’ve been on the go all day and listening to this from my phone! I particularly loved this chapter. It was just amazing all around. I have loved all of your characters. I especially have loved seeing with them saddled to this woman haha!

I have LOVING this.

A lovely story.
Wickham’s misfortunes at the beginning give Darcy and Elizabeth a chance to interact without the bias of malicious tales, so they are more relax and things proceed more smoothly.

Thanks for sharing your story. I enjoyed reading it.

Thank you! It was a wonderful and at times funny journey.