*high pitched screaming as i read this* god i love this!

Love your story. Thank you

I loved this. And Neal getting the family he deserved. And Peter and El having a son. They are a good family. Hope Moz will be a part of Neal life also with the Burkes. .

Saw there is a sequel will have to read that.

Awwww this fic made me so happy, it was amazing

Wow! I mean, Wooow! Really, OMG!

How you can see, I just do not have words to describe how amazing this is... I found that fic because I started to read the sequence, but after the first paragraph I knew that I just have to read all before continue because it will be probably good... And I never was so wrong! "Good" not even start to describe how wonderfull that story is! I laught, I almost cry in some parts and my heart skip so many beats because of al this...

Thank you so much for that, you are an amazing writer and I will read the sequence now, tought I was thinking in just read all over again, because is to good for have to an end!

I am SOOOOOO happy you are doing a sequel!

Can't wait!

what is the sequel called?

This is one of the best Neal/parents (Peter & El) stories I've read! Thank u!

I do not believe it. You really and truly made have it. You've finished this story ...
... and God, it was heartbreakingly beautiful :o)
This has already begun as beautiful as Neal came down and El was in the kitchen. The following conversation was well written. And you can tell exactly how El, Neal wanted to say nothing (the whole events of the previous day and so) to him not to worry.
It was good that Diana came home and that Neal did not have to go to the office. I do not know if he had really gotten over so well. As nice as Neal always worries about Peter. He was really scared, Peter would get in trouble, because he killed the bastard. And it was also an accident, although Peter certainly has no guilt about James !
OH ... the punishment ! I could imagine right as Neals features derailed when he heard that - Grins - believed he really, the Burkes would do that? :O)
Thus, and from there I was again just the howling. That was as enchanting sweet since. The adoption papers !
Damn and sewn Neal. What is this ? Can you because still do not believe that you have deserved to be happy, safe and loved? Peter and El know exactly what they do, and you do not bring with it in danger or anything else, if you're staying with them. GRRRR ! Fool ! I tear it almost heartbroken when he said the two, he needed time to think about it. If not yet. HOWL ! But just as it was indeed the Burkes but let them say nothing. Even if they were devastated. So sad the whole damn.
Damn, you can just type too well. Where are my handkerchiefs ?
15 long days in which Neal could not bring himself to accept his fortune. Oh God, THANK Mozzie! You're a lifesaver in the event. Who knows what Neal would have made if he had not shown up? Properly so, wash this little stubborn young man really sleep upside down. He had badly needed. This conversation between the two was so wonderful to read. All the feelings of Neal came so vividly to the fore, and Mozzie was just brilliant :o) THANK YOU !
Nice to hear that Max has really succeeded. But even if he has saved the life of Neal, and I now no longer quite so hate him as in the beginning, I can not forgive him for what he has Neal, done before. But Neal may well ... even if he's gone a bit hesitant to Max in the interrogation room. The conversation of the two was then also written very great. Max, Neal has yet again jolted really.
So then who in the end, Mozzie and Max still helped Neal finally - after such a long time - was willing to accept his happy ending. SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL !
Even more handkerchiefs please !
That was the most beautiful scene in this chapter. As Neal comes home and El hugged and says: "I love you, Mom!" I clutched my heart with happiness together. Sniff !
Woah ... and Neal had doubts again. Afraid he would be too late with his decision ... but never in life. But Peter and El, Neal love it too much, as it still push away. Only because they were short silent ... actually more shocked because Neal had finally said YES. The two were able to believe their luck just barely.
And then the end ! "I love you too, Dad," was just perfect ! Mega big grin on my face!
Finally, I would again say THANK you. Thank You took us to this heartbreaking, emotional, funny and dangerous journey. Thanks also to you, has ever shared with us this story. And I very much hope that I will eventually read something from you. Because if so, I'll definitely be back on board :o):o)

I have to day that I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story from start to finish, it is truly wonderful. You have done an amazing job. It brightened my day up every time I saw a notification for a new chapter : ) Every chapter was so enjoyable and kept you wanting more.
I am so happy that Neal finally got his happy ending and gained a family that truly love him.
Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Keep up the amazing work you have been doing.

Awesome ending to a awesome story! Neal deserved to be with Peter and El aa their son n so glad he accepted them as parents! It still breaks my heart that its over! Please do keep writing n blessing us with your fabulous work!

A wonderful story , could you write a sequel to Neal 's life with his new parents and how he becomes an artist, for example, thanks for incredible story

Wow, the end's not near... it's here.

On one hand I'm sorry to see this marvelous story end. You did an amazing job here. I cried and laughed with your characters and had so many emotional moments withe the story. On the other hand I'm totally happy that Neal finally allows himself to get his happy ending.
Even in the last chapter you surprised me. I never saw it coming that in the end it yould be Mozzie to convince Neal to accept the luck he has with the Burkes and take the chance for a better life for all of them.

Thank you for the good time I had with your story and congatulations for your talent.

By the way: There's one way you don't have to miss the interaction with the readers. I think all of them would be back for a sequel. I certainly would.

WHAT AN AMAZING ENDING TO ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ! I'm just so sad this amazing journey is over but what a great ending chapter it was. For once I was thankful for max and Mozzie for talking some sense into Neal! I too would love for their to be a sequel about Neal Burke and his parents! I do hope you continue to write! You have a gift. I would love to read more WC fics especially ones with a young Neal :)