Can I just say that I LOVE your imagining of Mettaton? So many other tics portray him as just obnoxious, but yours seems to have a real depth of character. Also, I'd love to hear a bit more about this attack in the Sanctuary, maybe a Monster Files chapter?

Ah, it feels like home to come back and read all of these again.

But I can't help but wonder if you could whip up a trick up your sleeve for a Monster Files bit about THIS guy that tried to kill Frisk with a knife in the sanctuary.

This is lovely. Just the right amount of Formal and Free.

This is a really good story

This, this was very well written and I find myself wanting to know more, especially about The Sanctuary. They way you portrayed it, I dont really have the words to describe how it made me feel, only that I know that I would love to know more.

this was breathtaking

... I love this more than I can admit...

I think this is an interesting read though it feels like an epolog of a story i would love to read. :) i think it would make this even better to read the building up to this point. Like Lessons with Mettaton, some of the assymbles, Frisk making Human friends. More about the building of Sanctuary. I hope to be able to read more. Keep up the nice work.

Honestly? Too perfect. You have a style of writing that frames characters well, but doesn't explain wasn't enough explanation of how sanctuary came to be. The characters feel too formal, there aren't enough flaws. You can't do a time jump like you have without explaining the circumstances.