That Aqua Grunt... was his name Biff, or something?

OMG this is too much for me! I'm glad that you decided to have a parody of the Hoenn games, because you're doing such a well job with it. It's like every few paragraphs I'm laughing about something else that happens, and that's great! I can tell that comedy is more of your style, and I hope you keep on going with more of these parodies!

(And the 7.8/10 joke. OMG. I almost died when Brendan made that comment.)

I usually don't like reading Parodies, but yours are extremely good and amazing. Thanks for letting me find good parodies you and your co-author wrote!

Aww, it was a fun read. I was expecting a Delta Episode chapter but meh, I'll take what I can get.

Aww, I'm really gonna miss this story. I hope you start a new one soon!

Yup. It was nice knowing you two.

Aww it ended. It still felt sad that a story is ending. It's been a fun ride with the Hoenn kids tho. Looking forward to the next installment!

Hardwired into girl biology. Nice wording, there. I really liked the way this story ended. I'm so psyched for the next story. I loved every bit of this one!

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I absolutely loved this story though my heart got heavier as I reached the end because I don't want it to end ;-; Good job on this story! It made me laugh a lot and I just love May!

Ha! Blar-Blar! Do I spy a Gravity Falls reference? (I could be completely wrong, but it sounded so familiar...)

Hehehehhehe

So you brought Gardevoir x Gallade into this? I ship it.

It's Hoennshipping for me. Well, if you ship Lisia and Brendan, then maybe add some Zinnia x May. Am I weird for shipping that?

It should've been a steel pun.

Wait wait, is it over? Or is this still continuing? o.o