the biggest problem with reading this, is that you forget to add "not or "don't" in some sentences.
the rest is good, and i love it.

That was a good story and a good premise. My only word of advice is maybe look into a beta or be a bit not thorough in editing. The storyline was good but sometimes the errors just made it a bit hard to follow.
anyway, I did enjoy it and thought it ended nicely.

Becoming a stripper isn't stooping low that's an offensive thing to say

Awwwwwww!

I'm sure someone has said this already but... "veo que te cenita" means "I see you're getting high"...

This was a wonderful, sad, and heartwarming story. And I've only seen a few episodes of Glee.
~Haley Earthstone

An enjoyable read.

Please, No more spanish xD I know this story is completed but I hope you don't write in spanish again, please, It doesn't make sense.

Btw, good story.

Quinn and Joe are the worst couple ever

fue muy bueno.

Beautiful story. kudos

Amazing Story! Another Pezberry story please!

I thought Rachel was sterile? So did they use a close donor match or something? That's the question that is making me want more.

Very good, I loved your story and YouTube could make an epilogue...lol
Eager for more pezberry stories and congratulations on this story :)

so good!