It seems that my time with this tragic world is at an end. But this has been an absolutely heart wrenchingly beautiful, wonderful story. It will most certainly be with me for a long time to come. Thank you for such a spectacular experience.

"She's lying." That was the line this time. You are such a fantastic writer. It really hurts reading this story. Can't wait to read more!

Managed once again to hold off the tears until the Force told him to grieve. My pillow is soaked with tears right now, so thanks for that x.x anyways, next chapter away!

I almost managed to not cry reading this chapter. Right up until Tiplee picked Doom up and carried him with her. On to the next chapter I go!

Managed not to cry this time! Because my friend texted me and it distracted me! And then I told them about your fic so they're probably gonna be crying over it too now!

At this point my eyes are just dripping. *Now* the only reason I'm not opening weeping is that I have a funny tv show on in the background. This really is quite painful, but so very perfect. A vision of what could have been.

Full disclosure I read this one immediately after the chapter cause it's already complete but I've been making an effort to comment more often. I'm now in tears. The only reason I didn't cry reading the first chapter is because I was actively trying not to. But this is beautiful and tragic and it hurts to read. Yet I can't wait to read even more. You are an absolutely spectacular writer.

This almost brought me to tears. Beautifully written and I look forward to reading even more!

I may or may not have bing read the 12 chapters upon finding this, each is written wonderfully and ngl each could be extended into there own stories going god knows where, anyways thank you for writing these :)

I do hope that you continue this, maybe the last few chapters are based on the remaining Jedi coming back to save them

Please update. Does she die?

I was really hoping something like this existed. I was not disappointed. I cried on the second chapter and couldn't stop reading until the end of the twelfth. Fantastic work. Thank you for writing this.

I need more my man I'm dying here I love this story so much please please update soon?

I do hope you eventually continue this now the Clone Wars is over.

Would love to read about Obi-Wan Kenobi, CC-2224 "Cody" and the 212th Attack Battalion... and then Cal Kestis, Jaro Tapal and the 13th "Iron" Battalion! That will be an even bigger kick than Cal's psychometry can muster!

... Assuming if you find the motivation once again to come back to us, Elri. My sympathies for your plight at having your 'One Piece' stories being plagiarised.