Will you continue this? It's great.

So he sacrificed everyone's memories of him for his brother's body? But why does Alphonse have flashes of his traits / personality if he still exists? Can't wait to see the deal he makes with Mustang!

Oh geez. This is incredible. So original in it's construct and the execution is marvellous. We stay so firmly in Alphonse's mind, riddled with confusion and lacking clarity. It makes Edward's plight all the more persuasive seen through an translucent lens. Thanks so much for this stirring story! I look forward to hearing more from you!

I love the premise of this story, how Al has taken on Ed's role despite being a very different person. I loved Al and Ed's brief meeting in the last chapter, but I wish I could read more! This story sucked me in, and I want to know why everyone seems to have forgotten Ed even though he still exists, and I want to see how his confrontation with Mustang will turn out. And I want Ed and Al to actually meet and speak to one another! I know it's been a while since you've worked on this story, but I'd love for you to continue. Thank you for sharing your imagination!

I have read this before back when you first posted it and I am so glad I found it again. I love this concept! Your take on it is very unique and interesting, I could see it potentially actually happening in canon so it comes across very organic. I hope you decide to continue it!

Hi! I am so in love with this fic! I was wondering if you’d be updating soon?

It's been two years since this fic last updated. Author, wherever you are, I hope you're okay. And things are going good. I've really enjoyed this fic. The way you wrote Al's struggling thoughts, like his own thoughts and what Ed would say, seems so interesting to me. And when they see each other at the train station, it broke my heart. Thank you for writing this.

What I hate the most about this story, and your writing, is that IT’S SO GOSH DARN AMAZING HOLY CRAP THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT!
WHY DID IT STOP THERE
A BLOODY CLIFFHANGER UGH I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

You’re right. That was rather heartwarming. I’m more interested in the fact that I one remembers Ed at all. Except maybe Hohenheim? His absence is pretty suspect. So, eight chapters you say? Just to let you know, there’s still great interest in this story. Would love to see it continued

Absolutely amazing, I hope things work out for you

This story is one of the better memory sacrifices I have read! Seeing Al be Ed and Al is rather funny, and this chapter was rather heartwarming at the end. I do hope that one day you shall reappear and finish this :)

It always scares me a bit when, like this, writers have a well-written story that claims to be almost done if not complete, but drop off the face of the planet. I hope you're okay and I'll pray for you. Please udate when you're available, your story is really good!

wonderful story! more on the way?

This is extremely intriguing...will Alphonse work it out I wonder?

This is awesome! I thought that Ed and Al's souls were combined and that's why their memories are mixed and Al talks to himself? Maybe I'm wrong though since Ed is still there. Or maybe I'm actually right and there's just more to it. This chapter especially caught my attention, but probably because the plot has thickened. This is so well written and I can't wait for more!