This was so beautiful. I love it. I would love to see a sequel of this story.

Hey there, read this thing over and enjoyed re-reading it.
I loved the general character dynamic. I especially loved the character arc of Stan (which i guess was the whole point of the fic...).
Its a really good fic re-reading it. The only thing I dont understand was how Bill got around soo easily and the "other" Bill at the Hotel.

oh yes please! some Stanleyxfiddleford would he soooo cute! if that's where this is going! the story is done now so it could not be, but still. I can dream.

Bill's incompetence at playing human is one of the best things in this entire fanfiction. Bravo, good sir. Bravo!

Okay...
Okay...
I have been leaving short reviews but here we go
This FanFiction has to fall within the rage of my top 10 Fics ever. That's pretty high considering reading over 200 of them.
This Fic had an excellent use of emotion and it drove the story. The behaviour of the characters was psychologicaly sound and realistic in the way it was presented. The plot was so unique and different. I added this to my "read later" section and had been scoring it because of how boring the description sounded but after reading it I realised how much I was missing out on. This overall was an epic fic and I love how bill was denied at the end. Hope to see more good stories from you.

Bruh uhhhhh
You just kilt me

Muhhh this is getting interesting

I need more of stans background

finally, out of that retatded hotel

This is so nice

That was deep

... the development of a criminal. I love the mabel stan fluff

That was deep

... the development of a criminal. I love the mabel stan fluff

This is an emotional fic