Now Sophia is going to run from the PRT, and then she's going to hunt Taylor down like a dog. Should have at least crippled her, or something...

Very nice.

It's a good story, but it has a few problems. There are an incredible number of mistakes. Some a spelling and grammar checker might catch, others it would not. Your misspellings tend to take the form of other existing words. I'm guessing you used a spellchecker and just accepted the first option without looking at it; though instead of thought, chocking instead of choking.

There were also quite a few double-negatives. A double-negative equals a positive. You don't not want to avoid those and the confusion they create.

Is telling piggy the truth not enought? She really had to ruin her social life and reputation by exposing all her secrets. She broke the unwritten rules.

This feels unfinished but I really like whats going on here

This could prove to be interesting, I'm eager to see how the PRT reacts to Taylor's message. Both in regards to Sophia's actions as well as to Taylor's powers.

Yes Taylor, let the murderous psychopath whose life you just ruined free to act with an loaded crowsbow in her hands while you are in a hospital bed... real smart.
Nice work anyway, well done.

This is pretty good, can't wait for the next chapter.

Problem. You have this listed as complete, when it's obvious this story has at least 1 more chapter in it...

Very good job.

Well crap. Taylor just stole Regent's shtick. Now what's he going to do? Interesting idea, and I can't wait to see the immediate consequences. For a criticism though, if Taylor triggered that close to Sophia she should have had a sympathy trigger vision and collapsed. Anyway, thanks for the chapter!

What's NEXT?!