Reviews for Immortally Yours
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 39 . 7/30
Awesome story. Well written. Several parts made me cry.
Thank you for sharing.
PkScholar chapter 9 . 7/9
Harry somehow is the only human to know goblin customs trope: Check
Still a good fic but come on fam
The Ghostly Minion chapter 39 . 6/24
I’ve reread this story and it was a joy. Thank you.

However, This story would be immensely better if you got a Beta and gave her/him carte blanche to fix all the mistakes. Every chapter is filled with them — in some cases the meaning of a sentence has to be guessed. So let the Beta full rein and simply update each chapter.

TGM
jhechavarria chapter 8 . 5/8
i really dont like this.
they tell the weasleys everything? well thank god there exist no mind readers.. oh wait.

taking refugees to potter cottage? to their only safe house?
Guest chapter 5 . 1/4
I don't really understamd why the wands are not having any power themselfes. As everyone knows the elder wand is the most powerful want so... Is the elder wand the single wand with itself power or you just didn't think about it.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 39 . 11/20/2019
Interesting flight of fancy
FraulCruz chapter 10 . 11/10/2019
For all the raw power he have he's so stupid to leave his back open for attacks. Smh...
GrangerIsOurQueen7117 chapter 1 . 7/17/2019
if luna doesn't join this relationship ima riot.
Guest chapter 39 . 2/8/2019
Needs some serious work. The story is good but your grammar is atrocious. So very bad!

You need to fix:
Use of there when you mean their (and in something belongs to them, it is theirs.

To vs. too. Too means also, she substitute that and see if your sentence makes sense.

...many more. Seriously, do a spelling and grammar check before posting. ALWAYS!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2019
Good good
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2019
Good
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2018
Good great
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2018
Good
guardian of grayskull chapter 2 . 11/29/2018
Okay, even i wonder what the mysterious "prize" was thing is we never found out. And so two immortals gave up their immortal status can't blame them, but a deal with the Angel of Death is still a deal, and well i like this story!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/29/2018
Good
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