really interesting story

Well, that's definitely something new. I liked it very much, except for the times when there are too much musings/thoughts/philosophy. Waiting for the story to continue!

not bad

I was looking forward to the next update for this particular crossover. Unfortunately it seems that yet another fanfic with so much potential will never reach its conclusion.

Interesting. Can't wait for more.

This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the great work.

There is legend that if you say Kyuubi no Naruto three times in a row he will haunt you, sometimes he will kill you, give you powers or stuff like that or just plain hang out with you.

Hmmm... Kinda confusing, but very well done!

Looking forward to future chapters!

- good grammar
- good chapter
- very good work on describing everything
- a good mix of dialogue and description
- curious as to how he is doing all of this, how do his powers work? would it be possible for him to do the same thing to Sier?
- fun to see what's going on in Rias's head
- 3 months for an update?

GREAT! I love your way of writing! Its very detailed and gives very vivid imagery which is amazing! The vocabulary you use is also outstanding which I like finding in the fanfictions i read. You have a great story and I would love more. Good luck!

yay i originally thought this story was gonna suck when you said issei and him were freinds since isseis a shitty characcter along with rias but now i rake it back i love this story more please more i love the fact that hes fucking with her

The mind games begin. Though I wonder if naruto is gonna have riser have his way with rias or not. Would be more of a mind fuck if naruto could be a two places at once. That way one of him could be a new kid in kuho who befriends them. He would bring out her insecuritys and the other naruto would critize her or whatever needs to be done to make her crazy or whatever your goal is. Anyways I'm anxious to see how the story progresses please do update soon.

Oh my my my, I do declare you surely know how to ruffle some feathers...

Yeah... Idkwist (i don't know why I said that) either... Ok so I'm actually liking this... I thought when naruto visited Rias he was there in the flesh but it was pleasantly surprising to read that naruto sent instead a ghost like version of himself. Now my question is will you have Naruto come back to school and have him live a sorta double life or will you keep naruto "dead" and have him mentally torment rias?

I have a feeling this Naruto likes sadistic mindgames. I'll bet he's going to torment her all while building up her hope to get free from Riser just to snatch it away in the last second. There's a surprising lack of DxD fanfics where she ends up marrying him for good - even though that should be the logical outcome.

Am unsure, you said it is all part of the plan but just exactly what does Naruto get out of helping Rias? Is he planning to build her ego up and then in her match against Riser she failed badly just so she can come to him to beg for him to help her only for him to smile tell her no and Issei will not help her either?

It is possible that he plan to destroy the very thing Rias love and that is her bond to her Peerage? Well it is certainly possible to do that as Rias in canon certainly didn't did shat to help talk to her Peerage members about their problems and their past, just avoid the topic forever until their problems finally caught up to them.