Oh my gosh, I love this 3! Law knows 3 though I was a little disheartened with the outcome. On the other hand, it was quite amusing how Law manages to hide his true emotions after knowing it. It's funny though how Robin and Franky tries to cover it up only to feel incredulous because Law is so oblivous about Luffy's actions.
I love it how Law had sudden epiphany that he too felt the same for Luffy. Oh Law, you're such a denial queen.
Thanks for the update :D.

aamazing story
love them

Finally! Yay! I’m so happy!

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Oh, my goodness, I was so excited to see this updated! I read chapter 12 and then decided to go. Back and reread everything before reviewing. I'm glad I did, because I totally forgot that Law thought Luffy wanted the black gold ring for Boa, or that the black gold ring was even a thing. Luffy doesn't know that Sanji got it for him yet!

"So, when Trafalgar Law popped up right behind him and Robin… well, he was pretty confident he was about to be fired from his mission"(poor Franky! That line was so funny though!)

"Robin shot him a harsh look, and Franky returned with an expression requesting trust… well, she couldn't deny him that." (I really enjoy the by play with Robin and Franky and how their relationship has progressed though this fic too. Its cute!)

"Regardless, Law would go along with it, if it worked out… it worked out. If it didn't, then the experimentation was a failure. He'd still have fun taking advantage of the manipulative part of the Straw Hat crew." (Law, I really dont think ita going to be as easy as you think it will be)

Law finally knows! Yay! I feel like Law will get in the way of his own plans, and Luffy will just charge on regardless.

What a great chapter to read! I hope your dog doesn't eat the next chapter too!

finally he come clean with his feelings for Luffy, but it's now that the game will begin, hopefully he won't go overboard

Yay, you updated this story, it's still going, I'm so happy! :D

good chap

Law, you pragmatic twerp, you just made things more exciting.

Gag, geez oh man! I really, really hope you finish this fic. Like, itd be a crime against writing, against One Piece, against Oda himself if you dont!

Law finally got the gift! And his reaction was amazing! I really liked that he felt betrayed at first, and then realized what he actually had (in a manner of speaking). This was so, so, well done.

And if course he didn't get it, but Robin and Franky couldn't have been the only ones not to realized, right? What about Zoro or Usopp?

And does Law realized something is up? He has to, after the talk with Sengoku.

I hope you finish inspiration and finish this fic!

This is by far the funniest chapter, so I'm just going to put in the quotes that I loved:

1. It's his gift" she stated with her eerie tone, the one Usopp knew would be followed up by something violent. He braced himself for it in fright. "One he has yet to give so we should keep our voices low lest we ruin the surprise and ruin a great amount of planning." She stared him down, and Usopp swore he could hear his own death cries "right?"

2. "And how'd you notice him" Usopp continued pointing at Zoro as a crash sounded from the battle. "That's your blind side!"
Zoro's lips twitched mockingly as he stated: "it's only expected for the first mate to know where the pirate consort is at all times."
"You don't even know where you are most of the time!"
"What was that!?" came the dangerous response.

3. That Robin kept saying it was her effort- I mean Luffy's effort

4. Usopp choked as one of Robin's hands yanked his ears and resetting his thought process.

5. The chaos of everyone trying to shut Bartolomeo up at once

I loved the Robin and Franky fluff at the end too.

This is so great!

I loved that Luffy was looking for Dolflimingo under rocks. The line "Ace had taught him how to track animals there was no way Doflamingo was as good as the animals back home at hiding." killed me!

Ah! Ranecca got the coat! That's amazing!

It was a nice wrap up with Law and Sengoku. Does this mean the cat is out of the bag?

I was snickering so much at the bringing. I loved when they were talking whether or not to clean off the blood and then the ribbons. So funny!
Sabo's confusion is great, and the fact that the video of Dolflimingo covered in bows got out is great.

Sengoku's reaction was great, but Garp's was hilarious! I love that he thought 30 was a good age to find a wide for the boys! And that he kinda approves because Law is a doctor, and that he'd be related to Sengoku. Just, so funny.

Robin moving Law was sweet. Her shifting the blame to Usopp was great.

The last part was great. Now I really cant wait for Garp to meet up with them.

I loved this! The chaotic humor at the bringing with everyone wanting to help Luffy or fight Dolfimingo. So funny!

And Luffy's thought on Law was great. I really enjoyed reading that.

And the end, where they realized Luffy only told one person. I love it so much!

Oh, this is a great chapter! I love that everyone who loves Usopp is now kinda on a mission. And then Luffy carting Law everywhere again! I love it. Robin's conversation with Hack is great too. I wonder if Sabo will be overprotective?

This is the first fix I've ever ready that mentioned Law's coin collecting hobby. I love you for it.

I love your retelling of what happened, and how you capture characters thoughts and emotions. Very well done

Also, very, very well done on the fangirling of Bartolomeo.