This was amazing))

I LOVE IT! I really enjoyed reading this story! I do hope there will be a sequel.

Wow.
First of all let me start off by saying I am a huge fan of your works, my favorites being of the RiddlexPotter variety, but this fic blew any expectations I had out of the water.
Kailani was such a well-made character and unique to other OCs people put in Hannibal, I really appreciated that she didn't struggle with morality or fear of being killed by Hannibal, and I also liked how she and Will still maintained their friendship even after she became pregnant-there was none of the (pardon my phrasing) heterosexual 'I will take responsibility' bullshit. No, they made a mistake, acknowledged it, and moved on with their murderous lives. It was wonderful. :)
Also, your alterations to the plot were exactly what I have been looking for in this fandom, especially with your expression of Will. I don't believe for a second he was completely oblivious to Hannibal's manipulations, or that after having fully realized the scope of it, he didn't still love him. I love how he manipulates back and doesn't let Hannibal walk all over him (not to mention his brand of crazy contrasts so well with Hannibal's that it creates such an exciting dynamic).
Sorry for the rambling, thank you SO SO much for this piece of art (and holy crap you completed this in a month! That's insane!), and I look forward to your future works :)

"did a double take, accidentally making eye contact with her in the process and blinking repeatedly. He had sharp, blue eyes."

who? Will or Kailani? : a good distance from the beginning

Comment for the last sentence: wait does that meant that make him an extremely rude one then

Like an extremely, extremely rude

I absolutely love Kailani

Love it so far! Its hard to sometimes not let our own personalities seep into the characters we write about. I cam see perhaps Kailina is a reflection of u in here; I'm NOT saying that this is one of those annoying fics where the author ends up as a main character or smth in her own story, no, but rather as a common phenomenon among writers (myself included) where a few of our personal details slip in, almost unknowingly. J.K., too have mentioned of this more than once.. So yeah.. Makes it all the more interesting, infact, provided that its in a subtle way that only makes the story seem more realistic, for when we write from our own experiences, naturally there would be more feel to it.

I have never laughed so much during a story with so much murder in it. Great work.

I know it might sound weird but I think this whole story is just adorable! I absolutely loved it! XD

Two chapters in and I already love Kailani!

OMG that stupid reporter really thought she could get away with that type of snooping. No way in hell. At least some of Will's family is ok.

Yay! Winston is one smart cookie! He saved himself and Godiva. :3

OMG his poor dogs

Nooo! I hope Winston and Godiva are ok! :'(

You are amazing. Seriously. Most OCs don't fit in well with Hannibal but the way you write fits them in so well and neatly, plus your update times are superb for the quality of the writing.

Uh oh, Hannibal. Be careful! Will's not going to be so forgiving if you screw up this time...