So why did you stop? This is great..

:WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow...,...

Good chapter please next

Nice chapter

Emperor makoto

great story so far.

por favor actualizala esta muy interesante este fanfic para dejarlo de lado, y tambien quiero saber como se las arreglara el ejercito revolucionario con sus traidores.

Why not just drop Gamabunta and Gamakichi on it? Aren't spiders naturally afraid of toads?

poor Naruto xD it took close to twenty bottles (estimate) and getting basically screwed senseless by two hot girls to forget about the fangirls xD

Hi I love this story but you haven't posted anything in over a year is it still being done

It turns So Stupid the last few chapters. A princess who is swimming can go faster than Naruto who can run on WATER and run fast enough to make waves can NOT catch her? That is a huge pile of Bull Stink.

Good yet there are a bunch of errors. One big thing is Hinata is a tracker! Meaning a ninja run away she can still follow the tracks. Two is Naruto is really fast and can run down though retreating ninjas easily. Plus he has SAGE mode means he can track them down since he can sense them himself quickly.

please continue this

Good Chapter!

Yo! You dead?