Reviews for The Mega Protocol
Elena phantom232 chapter 1 . 1/22
it would be great to put sunset and rainbow in ben 10 omniverse's
Hero-Time10 chapter 16 . 4/4/2019
A great battle for a great chapter to end a great story. Now that mega protocol is concluded, you can move on to your other works. Personally, I'm hoping that you update Omni force war next.
JoJo knd chapter 16 . 4/3/2019
I enjoyed the final MP chapter, and the battle was well written and a good example of how type match-ups aren't everything.
ImmaSupa Stargirl chapter 16 . 4/3/2019
The battle was great. I was sort of half expecting the two megas to knock each other out since both were using moves that were 4x effective on each other, but I guess Swampert did land more hard-hitting attacks, so there's that. Still was fun to read. The sneak peek was also good and I'm glad that after three years, The Mega Protocol story arc is officially over and you can move onto your other works.
TerrorKing10 chapter 16 . 4/2/2019
Well this chapter certainly wasn't what I was expecting. Somehow it surpassed my expectations. I liked the dynamic and backstory you gave Ben and Sceptile, but I would've thought that Professor Rowan or at least Gingka would've at least tried to inform Ben about his Flygon dying. It was pretty sad though. And that battle between Ben's Sceptile and Korra's Swampert was intense. In a way, it reminded my of Iris's Dragonite battling Clair's Druddigon. The protagonist's pokemon refuses to listen at first and takes many hits, but after a quick heart to heart with his trainer, the pokemon manages to turn things around, but still loses regardless.

Overall, this was a great well-written chapter, and after 3-4 years since you started it, you can finally put this story to rest. And it was quite an amazing read. Now I look forward to whatever you plan next.
nidaime kiroi senko chapter 16 . 4/2/2019
Nice Chapter,
And the sneak peak is nice, and I hope it will give you a rebound in reviews
TerrorKing10 chapter 15 . 3/18/2019
I read both Rex and Korra's chapters and I liked how you portrayed Steelix and Swampert. The battle between Mega Steelix and Mega Aggron was quite the epic clash of steel types, and it was pretty interesting how you portrayed Korra's Swampert as a timid bruiser (sorta reminds me of Eduardo from Foster's home for imaginary friends) Only one more chapter to go, dude. Good luck, you're almost there.
nidaime kiroi senko chapter 15 . 3/15/2019
Good story,
You are really good in writing and blending these characters from other universes you know.
Most authors fail to do what you do and it amazes me that you have a few reviews on your stories.
ever thought of putting stories in tvtropes?
Dragoninaki chapter 15 . 3/15/2019
I read it and it looks great
Harriet546 chapter 14 . 2/13/2019
Awesome job. Rex has shown his bond with his Steelix with Mega Evolution.
ImmaSupa Stargirl chapter 13 . 9/10/2017
So... did Gallade DO IT with Medicham? (Sorry I had to)
someonestupED chapter 13 . 9/4/2017
That was good. I enjoy the new chapter but I find Boruto's attitude in this one unbearable.
Wesley Yin chapter 1 . 5/21/2017
Maybe you could do the origins of team omni and how the first eight main members were do it!
CherryPeach12 chapter 12 . 4/7/2017
I sure do wish we got to see Mega Gallade and Medicham in action in the anime. And the fight between the two was spectacular and both were in sync with Hinata and Naruto. Can't wait to see what happens next.
TerrorKing10 chapter 12 . 4/3/2017
I liked the scene with Hinata and Medicham training together. The way you wrote those two makes their partnership so fitting and realistic. And the battle between the two psychic/fighting types was really epic as well. Guess I sorta know why Gallade's going through Heroic Self-Deprecation. I also remember him picking a fight with Ash's Greninja, which he'll no doubt regret in the next chapter. So, what will you update next?
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