I just completed Lost and Found and Heaven and Hell after a few years in between my first reading of this series I like to do this because it feels like a fresh reading for me. I don’t remember everything between readings and it almost feels new. I enjoy your writing and love your stories. I know you re-wrote Heaven and Hell to conform to your readers wishes. I for one would love to read Heaven and Hell as you wanted it to be written. Let Steve re-enlist in the navy and let it stand and have him deployed. I sincerely hope one day that you will give us your version as an alternate ending. I’m sure I would not be the only one interested in reading it. Thanks for your great stories. I truly appreciate your work. Best, Peggy

Omg! The tears are falling as i read this. I know I'm late to the fanfiction game. I didn't know this existed. I've been a big fan of your stories these past couple of months. This one by far is my favorite. I could totally see this as a two hour hawaii five-o movie. A sort of epilogue to the show. You are a talented writer and i have truly enjoyed reading your stories.

After reading your other story, I read this one as well. The plot is excellent and I like the way you write these characters. Thank you so much for sharing!

Wow- this story is amazing! I normally only read Steve and Catherine but thought I would give this a go and gosh I’m so pleased as this story has everything! Made me cry so badly but love Steve and his family so much! So well written!

I love your stories, I really do, but I wish I never read this sequel. As usual the writing was fantastic. The bittersweet ending was nice and all, but you made me cry. And not just tear up like other stories have done, but full on streaming tears, need to blow my nose cry. So good job in the eliciting emotions department. I salute you. But do me a favor and warn me before I read anything else if there's another story that will break my heart like this one. Thanks.

i cried through that entire chapter.

I hate you. I hate you so much right now. Grrrrrrrrrrrr!

Wow, I know you wrote this a while ago, but I must say this is the very best story I have read in a long time, and that includes published books. I love adventure/mysteries, and I love how you took the characters out of the normal TV plot lines (1st part) but still captured their personalities. I especially enjoyed how you brought in our favorite 5-0 characters in part two. I have had unfortunate experiences with friends who have lost their daughters at young ages and you nailed the horror, sadness, depression and anger of the two parents. This was very hard for me to read and I'm still emotional about this story. Great job, Thank You. Sometimes it takes a tragedy to help you appreciate and cherish what you have.

Geez oh man... i stayed up until 3am reading the first story, woke up with no voice and stayed home from work and cried silently as i read the second one... dude thats awesome!

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I LOVE your stories. I really hope you continue to write more! Perhaps even some Danny stories as well?

Thank you, once again, for writing such captivating stories. After you have completed a story, I start from the beginning and read right through. I think it will take a while before I can do that with Heaven and Hell. From start to finish this was an emotional roller coaster. So powerfully written, it really touched me.

As always, I can't wait for your next.

A wonderful conclusion - and a very fitting ending. :)

I loved it and can't wait to read more Steve/OFC stories from you

Brandy

Kudos! Fantastic story, loved all the emotions that came with it. I laughed, I cried, I experienced everything from the highest highs to the incredible lows and everything in between. That's what I want from a story and you delivered it. Thank you!