I kinda surprised this has so few reviews. Anyway great as usual, rarely do yo get someone who is good at both smut and plot, and you always have been in my opinion. I'm going out on a limb and guess that Jade is going to get a thorough pounding from step daddy. If so, can't wait!

Well damn a great chapter, it's great to see this story continue. Too bad it's no nut November and I can't really enjoy it.

Interesting story

you are one twisted warped author and I cant wait for the next chapter ! and do so hope to see a super-syjin in the future

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)

So any reason why Shizune can't contact the Vegeta Valley Poke'centre? Granted it's an older Centre but it would still need a way to contact other Centres for emergency transfers and such. Call Vegeta Valley, ask them to pass on a message to the kid to stay there for a while. Simple, and non of the American Tail, Fievel and his family consant misses crap. Too sad the first time.

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great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more)

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more)

Guys turning into girls too much ruiend the rewrite for me really liked the original but cant keep reading this thanx anyway

Very cool. Definitely see some odd stuff happen but those parts seem to just fit with the overall story and the character interactions are awesome. I might have been able to just read this and the first chapter together to get hooked into the story. Should be interesting to see how tough Ryu really is when he runs into Sutura's past. You are really making an excellent story here and with your other stories. Just can't seem to get enough.

Saw some stuff I have come to expect in a pokegirl story and some interesting changes with Ryu and the siblings. Kind of cool to see each author's interpretation of this series. Already read what is out of Phantom SEED and happy to continue following it. Loved reading it and enjoy what I have seen of this story as well.

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more)

Another badass chapters guys. I just wish they'd come out sooner. I've been eagerly awaiting for what seems like eternity. Either way, good job gents. Until next time, when Jaden returns! Yay!