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Eliazar Chandra chapter 8 . 7/23 It would be nice if you put minato is secretly son of Madara uchiha. |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/19 Thank you |
murder leo chapter 1 . 7/5 bueno... la verdad es que no esperaba que agarraras a Yamamoto y lo pegaras en naruto, aunque es una buena forma de fic de naruto |
robert krause chapter 5 . 6/25 when the in the whirlpool uzumaki had rule it now and when Dan Kato had get to help Naruto out like he did when his dad had lean under him when Nawaki had be the same way too when both men and Tsunade had Naruto god mother when the Dan and Nawaki had his god fathers and on his bithdays he had get moeny form them and was save up too, when naruto had get up the racks now , he had open up a bouny huther co fox nights fire , and he had get some s class bad guys and woamn too, when his office wall is full of them now , even dather masks too like a black men who had vooide and naruto stop him too, when used his twin srowds and daggers too, when the whirt top hat is no the wall and under it dather mask 1 , when others here too, when naruto had keeping workings too with his own spy net working when his dad and mom find out the 2 had made it naruto took over the whripool spynet wroking as it head naruto was more super it then the Sandaim Hokage own fomer suterd was naruto had only coffice or tea , his ways of living on the land was odd too, he not like inns or keeping a lover , his was to spying on the foes and others vaillges too, when he was Funintsu Master and spy master when before doing it he was abut black ops meber and now doing it now , when get marring now , living in the west part of the whripool now , and keeping his home office too, his wife was not in it it times naruto get home he well be in his men cave den workings out or raeding books or scrolls when siting in this office , sir i robert krause was showing a way of naruto keeping his home office when his going to it to keeping his mind on workings and showing his men cave office was cool too, itis not samp you sir , i be a fan of you workings before , |
damienfarrar10 chapter 6 . 6/25 Good story |
robert krause chapter 2 . 6/9 when he and Kushina had get home with the senju and when in the back bed room cub size bed room for him, he get to working on his daily book a black and green book with a old ninjas vast he get of the cave of the sand ninja who rack is abut and jon , then the men get cut his head off by him now and when then the head why was sill there is a black hair now , get to working no it for his new life when get it fin with Naruto was happy saying in the book it well be good to me and my sword back as one , on the sword is the same men he kill off own looking now, when then time to stop the darks ones for good , when get it down now , and crying now , only it was mix to both good and bad too, when he say do be on the move too, |
robert krause chapter 6 . 5/14 when ria had living on now was Naruto own ninjas jon and she was good it too and under her Naruto was up the ninjas racks like his step brother doing it too , when both were in blue vest and then abut black ops and then SP jon and when his step brother get up to it now and Naruto had his own body huthers co fox nights fire now, as why Naruto it times be looking it some body huthers shops in others vaillge s like rock mist and wave and when he think why not my dad may not love for it but money form can help out now , he and his 2 woman be looking it him now and abut black ops men and woman each had move up the racks and his step brother be doing it , and 2 money he get form the mob money form the wave had help out too , like him to get some new house like the west part and he need to doing it now , when doing it Naruto had get to workings it nights like most of his foes had be doing it , when his brother ninjas tame had ask him why with you step brother he workings nights and he made money form the evil body huthers cos sir , when jack ross , Naruto had be like you it times a big ego ninja but his need it to pay for him and his 2 wife to living in the house in the west and his workings for his own clan , each clan had some thing for this vaillge in the whirlpool and Naruto feeling it body huthers is it for him 3 he was abut ops black before spying and killer off foes like for a when , ho not way of it before , when Naruto buy out a 2 house when old men jack SR had get kill off Naruto buy out his little cub size house out and put his stuff in it a office on the 1 floor and on the 2 is a bed he put in and on the top books of boing and others stuff he get over time , when on the wall is pics of men and woman he took out and some woman of bods and muslces too on the 2 floor now, when in the back Naruto workings with swords and others stuff , it one day Naruto had meeting ten-ten who is now his side kid , when she and Naruto team up , for when she was in her own little cub house office too when Naruto mom find out about it she was why Naruto keep a office on 1 floor and a bed room on the 2 , and ten-ten get her own house now , |
DragonForceAsh chapter 4 . 5/10 went out like a badass, had no fear in dying |
robert krause chapter 8 . 5/10 when doing death masks for a long time Naruto had 109 of them on the wall of west wing in time was when his mom had her office in when she had running whirlpool and the clan form and when Naruto took over for her he had put the death masks in on the wall some was foes he took out and others was of a old men john Robertson a old men who rule and owner and king of a city in the lands of winds Naruto him out and his right hand woman and 3 top officers men , when find money and gold and others stuff others in the city get took out and money form it he keep and art too , when slaves who living in it get move to the whirlpool for when others join up in get jobs and houses to living in , when Naruto get some kids too all 4 grils and one boy who Naruto had help with reading and then the boy get big and tall , big Leroy , his now the clan helping and bony gund ,now when the grils were now part of hell cats a gril bony gunds unit , when then Naruto 1 kids twins Naruto JR and his twin sister dawn ray is in school and a sister form aonk is Roberta Leroy , is the same too, when get out she is now Eille JON and running her dad old bony huther co abut fox , she is sage too fox now , when Naruto JR had a dog name duke fire , and his is a chue rack , as is sister now , |
robert krause chapter 8 . 5/4 when the DR one Naruto had some bad blood with get took out with his sword to the head and his mask Naruto had on the wall now as well is twins lady stone heart and her twin brother rick stone who Naruto took out before get his new sword , one time a rock out of outspce came down and made out of it sword ,a dagger axe and battle axe and a whip each was made out of when Naruto and his dad made it them when the sword was last of them made for him son but Naruto had not get for his dad put under a big super size rock and mad about it Naruto had lean to get you need to get more muslces and mind to doing it , when in school he was doing it when others stuff be made was put out to parts of ninja vaillge s like whip and others stuff , battle axe and dagger axe is in the west now with twin warlords max and Sammy , the 2 had used to doing wars and battles , when the whip is in sound vaillge a woman lee wolf had used to workings others in rice now she is lord queen now ,be former ked of sound vaillge , when a staff of the wolf was unkown who had ,Naruto had find it in wave vaillge when working as a bouny huther and took form the top LT big mon fox , a evil head of the founds house kids be used as hit men or killers , Naruto meet them before and took out the big hulk woman , and her kids too, when Naruto is muslces be big and get out the sword now was used it now for it now, ,sir why not let Naruto get a super size LOIN to working with him as his battle co host like battle cat was for he-men . |
robert krause chapter 3 . 4/30 now is his so call god father is be a pain in the in ass ,if he get kill off , if i Robert Krause was Naruto dad in time Tsunade 2 loves ones her lover dan and her brother i well get them be his god father when Tsunade is sill his god mother , as for the school in the whirlpool it will be one super size big too , when Naruto meeting his ninjas tame comer it was to be the Orphans one boy of the 3 , when the get to working too, as for Naruto and his mom and dad living in a town house too , with 3 up floor bed rooms and bath rooms too, when in the 1 floor is living room his dad home office and his mom own office too, as for Naruto well get his own paly room , when his keeping a live size doll gril out of starfox a blue fox gril , when others he get be doll grils and books too reading them too, like battles and wars and some others too, i Robert Krause get ask why not doing 3 wife s with him like 3 is ten-ten who is into swords and daggers too like Naruto is too, when his others 2 had jobs to doing with , he and ten-ten is bound huthers and swords warriors of the whirlpool now , the 2 took out the mist top men and woman out , like Nazis top offices will be like , only the 2 had get money form it all , Naruto and ten-ten used it to put into some offices and he get a man cave for his own used and ten -ten had her own gril shed house when she had her swords and others staff it , as for keeping the 2 others stuff Naruto had 3 ninjas vests on the wall ,as well is abut black mask on the wall too, fox wolf and rat too , well is art of men and woman s class bed guys and woman he took out , |
robert krause chapter 2 . 4/28 when Naruto had get a green and black book was working not stop on it and when he was fin over it he had it be put into a lock box and he move to whirlpool before he was dead of old age it was for his own boy like one name Naruto , when Naruto was 3 years old he get book it the time and a note was to saying it read it was to helping out too, when doing it now , when others in the ninjas vaillge was paly balls and others games he was reading books even this one , he keeping in his bed room now , when going to school and doing it now , when Naruto meeting Yamamoto Senju head and his own Private moto and uncle too, when the 2 had get to good frinders the he was with Naruto sword men too , when Naruto one day find a mote rock out it Naruto and dad made a sword and before Naruto had get it his dad had it under a big super size rock and put into it by have his hands on it and made Naruto put into it now and tell him he get when his was full of get it , muslces now mad about , it mind in him think his dad be mad about it and had to think his dad was be not like his foe old men , when get to bed room like Yamamoto Naruto keep a book on it too , only Naruto is blue and gold book , . sir this was some thing out coon and why sons had with them dads too, as for why not let Naruto get sarkura as his 3 wife is more cool saying Robert Krause fan of Naruto and sarkura , was think of it now, this is not samping you sir , |
robert krause chapter 2 . 4/20 when in his gust bed room Naruto [Yamamoto] had keep his black book and be working no it now full of hiosty to keep down for when to one day his own life men get it now , when doing it now the men get it over few of odds and ends too, he be workings to stop the bad stuff too like the old men and his 2 tames mats and his foe /frinder get stop too, |
robert krause chapter 5 . 4/11 when Naruto and his big step brother had doing some body hunting and when working on the last job in lands of woods Naruto and his brother find some old hut like house the 2 used before as sleeping out in and some time eating too ,when on the wall is art of woman with muscles and big size bobs out too , when the big step brother sleep on the 1 loft with bed and Naruto on the 2 loft now , when then most nights was long not good but the 2 do find and took out thifes out and when going into the men own bags find money and gold too , when get home Naruto buy out a house west of the lot #334 -5 he put a house he made when made to rack abut black ops and get cap rack now ghost fox name he get when the house had 3 beds rooms and 1 bath room and den into the living room now , when in the back of house Naruto keep a body hunting office to running with , like his step brother had doing it too , sir this not spam you but my own think of brothers who working as body hunting co and keeping it away form them wife s and kids too, 2 sill love you workings with Naruto sir , Robert Krause |
robert krause chapter 4 . 4/8 when in time Naruto had get back his sword and was used it in ninjas stuff too like took out rouge monk of wind and he get money form it too, when in the whirlpool Naruto buy a lot of land to made a home for his 1 and 2 wife to living in it is old ships boxes Naruto buy out and made a house out of , it now , when in the floor Naruto keep his own men cave office with 3 ninjas vest and old abut black masks too on the wall , when west part had old foes pics and stuff he get too when paly boy books were on the desk now , when he had his bed room with h he keep 2 cub size bed room now even when both here had get 2 sets of kids now , when Naruto move him own stuff now a cub size bed room now , on the wall is pics of his frlmy both his mom and dad and the 2 wife and step brother too , when the same with 2 pic and 2 others ninjas tames now , when he sleep here is more quit too, PS sir this not samping you sir but my own way of showing when a men had his wife get kids and the same with 2 wife ,he made his cub size bed room to living in and keeping as his own men cave den and office and as for the bed room came out of Dallas TV show JR Ewing had used to living in as fan of the bad guy and Naruto too was cool , sir |