Reviews for A Knife in the Dark (Child of Albion:Book 1)
teatime123 chapter 5 . 4/10/2017
the story stop update even they hadn't meet? pls continue update!
tiffan chapter 5 . 6/24/2016
Totally love your description of the characters, you captured both the ones from the show really well and realistically( in that particular universe) and established brilliantly your OCs. Also it's great to have a kid Merlin adventure story, as I haven't found many (good ones) yet. And, I love that you really paid attention how you name the characters, and are explaining the meaning of each name. So Pleaaase update this story! I think it's awesome you also want to start a series with this, as the idea really gives the oppurtinity to do so:)
Sagitarscorpion1 chapter 5 . 4/5/2016
You should definitely continue this story, I really want to know how Arthur reacts to Merlin.
OUATLovr chapter 5 . 12/26/2015
Ah, I love it! I really enjoy reading about Morgana and Arthur getting along, and enjoyed getting some insight into Arthur's thoughts this chapter. Can't wait for Merlin and the gang to finally meet! And poor Asa; he's got it pretty rough right now.
Coolestbee chapter 5 . 12/23/2015
Wish you the same. Want some Merlin-Arthur action. Wish they'd meet soon.
Coolestbee chapter 4 . 12/9/2015
Looking good so far. More chapters pls. And i think the series idea is a great one.
OliversTwisted94 chapter 4 . 12/6/2015
I am hardcore hooked on this story. Can't wait for more!
OUATLovr chapter 4 . 12/6/2015
Loved the interaction between Morgana and Arthur- you've really got them spot on! And aw, poor Merlin. What was Kanen up to, anyway? He seemed extra creepy there. Hopefully the others show up in Ealdor soon. I'm so excited about this being multiple books!
Dan chapter 3 . 12/2/2015
Amazing! Please keep updating!
update 1 chapter 3 . 11/30/2015
You so like up darting and m akeing a nother chapter would put you and Santa's good list.
OUATLovr chapter 3 . 11/30/2015
Aww, Merlin being all scared when he used his magic and Hunith comforting him was absolutely adorable. And I think Aerona could be trustworthy, but it does seem a little suspicious that she knows something's going to happen...hmm...Also, I think you can find the actual incantations on the Merlin wiki site, if you're still looking.
mersan123 chapter 3 . 11/29/2015
Enjoyed the chapter. Thank you.
Aaronna chapter 3 . 11/29/2015
Does being below the pillow while being under the bed count? I look forward to the letter and Merlin and Hunith's talk.
superwholockedrem chapter 3 . 11/29/2015
Can't wait for more. Fantastic description of the burst of magic and a mothers reaction. Thanks for writing and sharing your awesome work!
REMal
Rue Lupin chapter 1 . 11/28/2015
I love this so far please keep updating!
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