NAAAAAAAAWWWWWW! SOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUTE!

Update this one
i like the way the plot is advancing
*meow*イーサンアミン*meow*

I think your fanfiction is absolutely awesome!

I encourage you to keep on writing it, I'm sure it'll end up great in the end!
*This comment fills you with DETERMINATION*

(This isnt a real Review only a reminder to Write more chapters so please make a new Update again ok(no hate(i love this Story(this is why i made this Review))))

The way you write Chara was great! I can't wait to see more of them. I did NOT expect Frisk to become half monster. It's sweet that she now has powers and it makes sense that Sans and Papyrus were about to share their soul with her because they are all in a way skeletons. I hope Frisk's powers don't go haywire anytime soon.

Oooh, new powers! Sweet! How's Frisk gonna use them though? Will she lose control? I must find out! KEEP UPDATING

Nonononononononononono what is going on is it Chara if it is then Chara needs to be slapped and I swear if something happens to Frisk then I will imagine ways to murder you author person so you better not ruin this freaking fabulous fanfic

Great! Do you think you can add more characters though? Like maybe side characters(Temmie, Aaron, ect.)mini bosses(napstablook,mad dummy) and bosses(mettaton). I know this sounds like a lot and I'm sorry about it.

This was an enjoyable chapter. I do hope to learn more about Frisk's past before they went to Mt Ebott.

love the story. Keep up the good work!

I like this take on everyone. I feel sorry for Frisk when Kyle did that to her. He's such a jerk. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

It doesn't matter if it's late, it's close to Christmas!