| Reviews for Unforeseen Consequences |
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Angelfish369 chapter 9 . 1/1/2019 I had so much fun reading this! Sora and Yamato are hilarious, and seeing how much Taichi and Koushirou care for each other without properly being able to express themselves and all their misunderstandings just made those last kisses so worth it. Their relationship is so unique and you captured it very well. |
Faded Galaxia chapter 9 . 10/8/2016 I would seriously enjoy a sequel. This story is awesome. Everyone's completely in character. Love it. |
diminuta chapter 5 . 8/2/2016 Ok no, i hace to post a review because the coment about yamato band just kill me, genuis |
Diminuta chapter 9 . 8/1/2016 I didnt knoe that i need koushiro x taichi since this day, this is so lovely and well written than i could help miself, great job, i really enjoy koushiro caractherization, it really sound like him! |
bobbyneko chapter 9 . 1/12/2016 Lol that was an epic epilogue. And that kiss last chapter was so sweet. I love a lot of the natural humor in your writing. Its so good natured. Great work! Thanks for writing this! |
Faded Galaxia chapter 8 . 1/3/2016 I love this so much. This is incredible. You have both characters down to a T. Amazing. |
KumoFuzei chapter 1 . 12/26/2015 I like how you characterised everyone. I felt they were right. Drunk Tai was exactly how I expected and the drunkness was done well. I also like how you're not rushing to the ending. Nice job :D |
SisPan chapter 1 . 12/14/2015 OMG I found a little Taishiro jewel. This was so perfect, and they boyh were so IC ;o; |
bobbyneko chapter 8 . 12/6/2015 Love it. Really, an overly communicative person cant expect or force someone who is not naturally communicative to suddenly be that way. I almost feel like Taichi guilt tripped Koushiro into a relationship. (But its still all in character! Kou is too logical to really get it and Tai is always angsting over stuff.) Anyways, great kiss scene! |
bobbyneko chapter 5 . 12/6/2015 I love how its Tai after Koushiro for once (the dork with a crush on the jock story gets old real fast, besides the fact that those stereotyoes dont even exist in Japan, thus could not have possibly been their character) Anyways, again i love the angle youre approaching this from |
CresantShooter123 chapter 8 . 12/4/2015 *casual squeal* eeeeep! They kissed ahh! I'm so happy |
ZhayZhay chapter 5 . 11/30/2015 My goodness this is awesome! Fantastic writing and fantastic story, please do continue! It tugs all my hearstrings and I'm so, so eager for these two to stop missing each other already. |
Celaj15 chapter 5 . 12/1/2015 Dammit Kou! Just come out with it! lol This story is different from a lot of other Taishiro stories I've read. Kou and Tai are really talking things out and it doesn't end with them doing something in bed. XD Joking aside, I really enjoy this story. :) |
tokus chapter 4 . 11/29/2015 I really like this so far! You've mentioned that you weren't confident in writing romance, but I like this more subdued approach towards Taichi and Koushiro's dilemma. The understated emotional awkward in this chapter particularly on Taichi's part was great too A I also like how despite Taichi having feelings for Kou you've obviously put their interactions as friends above that, being comfortable with accusing each other of things and allowing Taichi to...strip down in Kou's house haha. In terms of dialogue its just my personal opinion that Kou's speech wouldn't be quite as verbose as you've made him, but I'm assuming you've combined elements from his dub incarnation, and it still comes off pretty well. Taichi's I really enjoy, his defiant uncertainty in regards to Kou's... ?-ness about his feelings for him is pretty great! Really enjoying that emotional turbulence on his part, pfff Can't wait to see what you've got for the upcoming chapters! |
Tokus chapter 4 . 11/29/2015 I really like this fic thus far! You've mentioned that you weren't confident in writing romance, but I think that you've set up a really nice subdued sort of approach to Taichi and Koushiro's dilemma here, and I like how despite Taichi having feelings for Kou you've obviously put their interactions as friends |