An interesting ficlet, it works well as stand-alone. .
Caller her 'Your Overlordness' might not have been a good idea, it might awaken the memory of Fred reading the 'Evil OVerlord List'. ;-)

You really do have a thing for writing promising beginnings and then leaving them hanging, don't you? *grumble*

Fine, off to see what else you've got.

Um ... this feels a VERY GREAT DEAL like the first chapter of something a lot longer. And epic.

I believe I'll Follow you.

I liked this. Shame you've marked it as a one shot. The antics of the God Kind in the Dresdenverse would be entertaining.

Not the empowered, super heavy weight, curb stomp everything version of Illyria through. But the actions of the de-powered God King with wilfully offensive social skills, the ultimate superiority complex, a fledgling concept of morality and the ambition to claw it all back would be great.

Illyria going hunting on Halloween for fellow immortals so she can crib a small part of their power would be awesome. I can imagine her picking up a coin and one of the Fallen trying to corrupt her; with Illyria just giving it a long vitriolic speech about how it's muck, the god it rebelled against was nothing but her tentacle groomer back in the day and the Fallen is a mayfly that should respect its elders.

Cackles! Very awesome!

im not sure who Illyria is, but if somone as rebellious as dresden calls her overlordness then she must have some seriously terrifying power