Grammar fixing review's still up.

My last review's up, just letting you know.

"their eyes widened deeply as Lenphad revealed what is was." is 'it', "It was some kind of vehicle with fours wheels," is 'four', "WHAT!?" is missing 'IS THAT', "We're glad that it was destroyed by the alien invasion." is 'wasn't', "This gave Elesis's more hope than usual." doesn't need the 's, "including the young sister." is 'girl', "EYAAAAAH!" needs a ? too, "...until she remembered as she bombs with her." is 'the bombs are with her.', "...landed behind the Twinsers knees." is 'Twinser's', "GASP" needs the !?, "She can't worry him forever," is missing 'about', "H-Hey! I didn't know, okay!" should be a ?, "Luchiel & Echo come to them." is 'and'.

"And it's seems you guys..." is 'it', and the word 'byut' is still there.

'I can't believe I've grown up to be so tall mature and strong.' needs a comma, 'And it's not like I'm fine with my chest size getting bigger.' sounds a little off for some reason, "Just where how they do all of this?" is missing 'and', 'They got it on the ropes again!' doesn't need an !, "Don't go and just charge like that!" should be "Don't just go and charge in like that!", "Is it just me or do they're look similar to each other?" is 'they', "you can kind of say that..." sounds off I think, "I'll cover you from the distances with my arrows. is missing a ", 'because of it's rampage,', 'while shaking it's body.', 'held on to it's neck tight.', 'as it was losing it's breath.', 'but it was losing it's breath so fast,', "he had this pick on it's shoulder." and 'suddenly awoke from it's sleep' is all 'its', and byut is but.

"Some kind scream quite well," sounds off, "So... what are you guys doin?" is doin', "You look like you're goin somewhere." is goin', "...make the girls scream for you'. is this ".

Please disregard the Eve question I wrote 2 chapters ago, I didn't see (or rather I forgot) that you already wrote it.

I liked the bit about dodge roll or pull back to read your opponent's movements. That is SO KH and KH II when I'm playing, always trying to find my opponents weak points.

I have to admit I find the idea of Scar not having control over those Mag Stones to be an interesting detail and understandable reason for him to have his hands full. Yet Wally's plans for the Nasod Inspector to be quite troubling, good thing he never got around to finishing it the way he wanted it to be. Though his soldiers all seem to find it a waste of time, understandable as they have no idea how terrifying that machine could be as a enemy.

Dem feel and inces...insect moment!
Thank you for update~

This chapter reminds me of Morgan and Lucina's support log when they tried to kill a flying bug, but caused a ruckus trying to avoid it. At least until Chrom came in and killed it...Then proceeded to scold them for making such a racket over one little bug.

Still, looks like Elesis has a very good imagination, but is too shy and embarrassed to admit what she's seeing.

Just curious, but this reminds me of FEA's support conversation between Morgan and his sibling.

i totally want to draw els x ele moments now, specially what you had mentioned :3 fufufu dont hate me okay?

Aww~ I thought they gonna do 'it'. Update please!

When you get back, could you reread your work from the start to see any typos needed to fix? Let's us know that you did. The only real question is: what happened to Eve?