UPDATE!

I REALLY like this story. It's well written and plotlined. I hope you come back and write more on it. It's easily one of the best op ash stories so far without having to be fast paced.

I have been reading so many times already and I really enjoy it. But I always thought you would update but then when I saw the last time it was updated I lost hope that I didn't check your other work and since then I just kept reading it when I don't receive any other update but now I just saw that you are still online I am wondering why you stop. So I ask now why did you stop updating update this wonderful story?

Wow I actually believe that a twelve year old these days can get a G string. So skanky these young ones be

As a pokemon fic this is good but as a romance novel it's sickeningly cheesy. I thought i could hack through a sweet tooth with all the dashing hero helpless maiden act but then all of a sudden Ash is now embracing her from behind and whispering to her and now she's sitting in his lap somehow. Couldn't this be a slow burn romance? Those are the ones that feel most natural and real, this just feels like infatuation and a one night stand, no real romance at all cos they don't even know three different things about each other

Great story, I love fics where Ash uses old Pokémon as well as new and just doesn’t ignore them. I hope that you one day continue this story like you have said.

Ok, This story is absolutely incredible. In fact the only story that I have found where Charizard's power even comes close to what you describe is Ashes of the Past which is a time travel story and therefore has an unfair advantage.

Seriously, please update soon and keep this story going. I really want to know how the tournament ends. Do Ash and Charizard sweep the competition, or are Cynthia's Garchomp and Lucario strong enough to give it a run for its money? Or will they completely outclass this behemoth powerhouse when they go mega? THE WORLD WANTS TO KNOW!

Ok, I love the story but one thing I noticed was at the start of Dawn and Zoe's match you had Zoe's Glameow block Bunneary's Dizzy Punch with Shadow Claw. Shadow Claw is a ghost type move whereas both Bunneary and Dizzy Punch are Normal type. This means that Shadow Claw would go right through both attack and pokemon while Dizzy Punch would still hit Glameow. This is just something that I feel must be pointed out as a long time fan of pokemon, the games rather than the anime (Stupid whiny voices).

Other than that, and some minor spelling or grammer issues that are mostly easily ignored, though I love the story and hope you keep writing it.

I love this cant wait for more

Really wish you would update this story. I've read it 3 times already, and an anxious to define our what happens

I love the Charizard omake! If he's this big a bada$$, I shudder to think of what his Charmander children could do when they become Charizards themselves...

Please update soon please please

this is good please keep going

This is one of the best Pokemon fanfiction I ever read. Thank you very much author. I hope you will continue this fanfiction.

This is awesome! Please update! It's difficult to find stories like this!