I thought the story was excellent, however all the... umm.. I guess extra formatting text? Made it hard to read...would love to read it again if you could edit it to get rI'd of that :)

Ooo I really liked this, in fact I was reading it on le tumblr when the app crashed and I couldn't find it again, and I was disappointed, but alas, it is here! Also, you may already know this but the html from the text has shown up in the story. It may just be on mobile, but I thought I'd let you know :P

Um, have you checked the formatting on this one? It's really screwy and I can't really read what you've written amidst all the HTML. I'm sure it's a really nice one, I just can't read it.

Zillah