Jeeeez! This is the best thing I’ve ever read! Loooooove it!

AMAZING. I CAN'T THINK OF A BETTER STORY THAN THIS

OmgI just loved this story! So good!

Just read this absolutely beautiful story you have here and I plan on rereading the rewrite you have going on so I'm going to put a ton here and I'll be back. I absolutely love how you portray the dragon slayers. It's really creative and interesting to see how they were messed with and how it translates in this sort of world. I really enjoy how Levy came to become friends with him and the struggles they have to be comfortable with each other. You definitely had me crying when Levy was kidnapped and on. Going to start on the rewrite so I'll be sure to express more love there!

Somehow I must have missed the last chapter, so I went back a bit further to refresh my memory... will need to reread the whole thing now that I know it's finished. Thank you! I love these two and this is a great story. :D

I do wish though that instead of a few days it had taken them WEEKS to get where they are now, considering Gajeel was tortured for 3 years and then alone in his misery for another 3 years. I feel this healing process should have taken a bit longer then 3 days. Regardless, I'm in love; it's a great story, you capture Levy and Gajeel so well and you keep making me laugh out loud. :)

omg this is just too good to be truecant wait to read the rest!

Ah! I just sat here and read all of this and it's amazing! Your writing is excellent! I wish I had this story telling ability! I've been reading your rewrites of this fic as well :) You're really talented!

God! I fell in love with the story! 3

Wow! I couldn't stop reading this! Amazing work, thanks so much for such a great read :)

Oh my gosh, I have no idea where to start with this! I've been reading fanfiction in general since 2002 and this is the best AU fic I've ever read. I am so in love with this story and so sad it ended! SO happy to see you reforging this story and I look forward to seeing what you do with it. How does this story not have more reviews?!

Your characterizations are spot on and I love how you pulled off the dragon slayers in this fic. It's extremely creative. I love Gajeel's and Levy's interactions with each other. Even though it was fairly quick for them to have fallen in love time wise in the story (it was, what, a couple weeks?), the way you built their relationship with each other made it very believable. Some people don't do enough to make the reader believe characters can fall for each other like that, that quickly, but you pulled it off spectacularly (it's one of my biggest pet peeves).

We don't see a lot of Natsu and Lucy in the story, but the way you portrayed their relationship with Levy you could see how close they were even without much screen time. I also love Igneel and you perfectly captured Jose major creep factor. Bravo!

I felt so bad for all of the test subjects and the horrible things they had to endure all those years at the hands of such an evil man. Gajeel's story just broke my heart, regardless of his previous background as a hoodlum.

And you are a master of suspense. I was on the edge of my seat, biting my nails the whole time. There was one point where I was reading the story on my phone and I had just clicked to go to chapter 11 when my phone wouldn't load the chapter! I thought the site had gone down and started to panic. Haha! Turns out my phone just needed to be reset. .;;

The only problem I had with the story is I felt the first part of this chapter was a little rushed, but outside of that this story is absolutely amazing and I will be keeping an eye out for the remastered chapters as they come!

~Masika

okay so wow? i loved every word of that story. this pairing def deserves more fluff and just... THIS -motions to fic- than the ship has right now

Ok so literally this was what I was missing in my life. I'm so in love with these two characters and had been craving this sort of interaction. I only recently started watching Fairy Tail and as soon as they were introduced I adored both of them and wasn't even sure why. They don't even really like each other yet but I still love them to death. This story was exactly what I was looking for. It flowed and the characterization was spot on. You have no idea how many times I squealed at these two and their budding attraction and the way you wrote it. Thank you so much for adding fuel to what may be the only two characters I've ever really shipped ;) You're awesome and I really look forward to more of your writing! Cheers :)

I really loved this story! I've been looking for something like this and I found it thank you!

I'M NOT CRYING. YOU'RE CRYING.
(tears of happiness and emotion ofc)