this story just keeps getting better, funnier, crazier, and more ironic... I love it. you do not know how long I have searched for a book of fanfic with a huge amount of relatable-ness to it. and I like how Derek comes from mars, which, now when I think about it, has barely appeared in the halo lore, so it's a nice touch. sempre fi (always faithful), christen knight, and sempre forte (always strong).

that... was...… awesome! I loved how you managed to capture the awkwardness of this whole situation, and, to be honest, when they so close to kissing my mind was shouting "this, I love this", but when they were interrupted my mind was like "oh come on! they were so close to greatness! they were this close!". what I'm trying to say is that this story has the just right combination of awkward, comedy, seriousness, and flat out "what the f**k just happened" moments for this to claim my title of "yeah, I could see this happening". 1-10 rating? 30/10 dude, 30/10.

i do hope you will continue this series, its honestly one of the most enjoyable fanfics ive read in a long time

Dang. I know how that feels. I lost my great-grandmother September of 2019.

Anyways, good start. And hilarious as well. A couple errors here and there, but nothing too big.

Is this still up for adoption? If so, may I adopt this wonderful masterpiece?

Great story I hope you can update this story soon

Really like this story. I just started playing halo again which made me like it better.

Hey bro. I'm re reading this story again. It's 2019. I have no idea where you are or how you've been.
I hope you're okay.
I just want you to know that this story is very close to my heart. I love it.

nice great story cant wait for more going in my favorites

Love this please do more

Well caught up again, do hope that you will continue this.

XD oh that last part cracked me up.

Its a super nice history,daam
See cya

Man I wish there was more of this

Update please

TOO YOUNG LOL