I hope to see more when it is done. If you have stopped could you please post it.

Sorry I haven't left a review in awhile. Love your story.

Davis.. or rather Remi... so terrible! I know Dearka will find all the girls and save them.. Can't wait to see how it unfolds! ... I'm so glad there is a continuation from the previous story! I hate cliffhangers.

Sorry I haven't review in a while. Love your story

Well it can't be denied that he's an industrious and resourceful fellow led down a dark, sociopathic road. How he pulled off all of that is a story in and of itself. It truly is an interesting predicament.
He's also sloppy and foolish for how often he's let his plans slip. The conflict resolution should prove to be pretty good.

Thank you

This chapter perhaps should have been drawn out a little longer. From the relationship perspective things happened a little too quickly on the Davis front. More drama over a longer period after the shooting would have been nicer and a more fun read. It just seems rushed.

I'm not discussing the security of this ball, the skill of the shooter, or the nasty effects that happen when a bullet hits bone as I think you made a decent attempt. Medically, a general anesthetic could have been used to knock them out. With chest wounds lung damage is likely, such as a puncture or collapse. It is also doubtful that Bree would shove her fingers in the wound. More surgery would be required for internal injuries than stitches, and to close off exit wounds as they can be bigger than the diameter of a pop can. Even Coordinators would be hard pressed to get back up quickly.

Thanks for the update! Really enjoyed it!

Very nice, Thank you for the chapter.

Very nice, you have been studying the series both Seed and Destiny. I look forward to the next chapter and any new stories you wish to write.

I don't find a lot of writers look up the characters they are writing about. Thank you for making these stories.

Have a Happy New Year

I feel you deserve a little more of a review than the usual "Great chapter" and "Thx for the update." Doesn't do you or your story justice.

I have read both stories thus far regarding In an Era of Peace and find that they are both enjoyable reads despite the incorrect use of similar sounding words here or there, (ie 'deflect' vs defect, 'site' when you mean 'sight') and sometimes idyllic and forced dialogue. That's no matter. Reminds me of soap operas like "The Young and the Restless."

The memory loss in Ch 7 was an interesting turn. Not nearly as interesting as linking all the way back to Heliopolis and indeed Phase 01 with Kato, but it worked for turning around the difficult situation you found yourself in with Mir going to Davis' apartment. But it seems like you've lost part of your plot devices in the mysterious beyond of the black hole like quality of women's purses.

Looking forward to seeing how this is resolved.

Very nice what a good chapter

Thank you for Making these stories, And Have a Merry Christmas